10-12 lines,
I could spit first, due by mid night tonight.
check in first.
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10-12 lines,
I could spit first, due by mid night tonight.
check in first.
Consider this my check-in and verse
This bitch can’t flow; I’m messing up his ether
His punches have less weight than an anorexic ~ wit jungle fever~*
His rhymes are evil, he betta talk to the bosses
And ask them please can they ~ reverse his losses~**
Add 1 to those losses, unless he turned into big pun
Cause otherwise you’ve got less chances than a ~ retard with a gun~
He can’t rap, he just a little bitch who wants to fight
He’s a two year old who found out about Pac last night
His wackness is inside his veins, shown by his stiletto
His punches couldn’t hit multiple, if verbs were an echo***
*: His avvy says light weight
**: He’s got four losses
***: An echo you hear multiple times as it fades, a stiletto is a knife, throat slashing etc.
I manafest into a demon when a pre-teen tries to diss,
Morphed into Juggernaut to slaughter power fist//
13 and still dope? wheres ya skill, im still waitin,
your better off loggin off and goin back to playstation//
Im not to be fucked with, like a crack head wit AIDS,
you cant even nut yet, puppy water, look at ya age//
throwin little punches that tickled me, and dont hurt,
then come up wit excusses like my dog ate my homework//
you playschool gangsta, I drop a bomb like its a d-day reality,
tryed to battle me, but fell victim to my fatality//
Uppin # 1 for the easy K.O. Fair explained votes please, the favor will be returned.
Yall know I always vote back, juz leave da link.
uppin # 2.
Votes will be returned, Just leave a link, thanks.
uppin # 3, AND if you vote, drop a link, and see me return the favor in less than 5 min. try me. drop the link......
go ahead, drop it.
UPPIN # 4....comon man, this is an easy battle, I will return a vote for an honest vote.
EVERyONE NEEDS AT LEAST 1 VOTE...lets make it happen.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=146038
theres another battle, only need 1 vote for the sweep.
Dazeco: won this battle only cause the onther dude had horrible everything.
The Phoenix: Your lines sucked. "This bitch can’t flow; I’m messing up his ether
His punches have less weight than an anorexic ~ wit jungle fever~*" WTF is "ether"
V/ Dazeco
Dez- won this by his punches and blows
kept it shorter than the oponent ...:.:
Truthfully to tell u the first verse was ether the song nas made against jay-z
which u were mentioning!!
Phonix - u need to elevate because that was sickly wakk
punches off target they missed cut the verse and the grapical text as in ~ retard with a gun~
that shit makes u seem gurly
Dez -nice stuff punches straight structure- is great but "//" needs to go thats amature battling!! medium battle !!
My vote Dez-!!
Datz wins this easily as phoenix (although witty) just put everything so badly. Phoenix just work on the wording of your punches and you would have won this (The echo/verb thing was really nice, but the wording was so poor it just didnt connect)
Vote// Datzecho
Hit up one of the battles in my sig with an honest vote. Thanks :thumbup:
Ether: Air, a form of purified oxygenQuote:
Originally Posted by nosam89
: A type of drug.
final uppin, thanks all for honest votes, I know vote takes time, and I WILL return vote, so drop a link.
thanks.
Lmao At Datzecho ..damn Homie You Won This Battle Hands Down...i Liked Every Punch The Verse Was Tight..very Enjoyable...had Me Laughing...
Phoenix-you Gotta Try Harder Next Time...
datzecho had a strong verse with solid punches and good personals. Good structure but as someonelse said ditch the slashes// tha pheonix you didn't do bad just not as good as datzecho, lilked some of your ideas but I don't like the spaces between bars, kind of puts you off reading it. If is all together it seems to flow better. Datzecho good verse.
V/datzecho
datz.....came wit some harder punches.....kept it short and sweet.....the flow was constant and your word play ewasnt that bad either....over decent verse dawg.....1
phoenix....dawg you cant put spaces inbetween your lines it looks amateur(i was doing the same shit..you get no votes)....but your verse wasnt bad....just need to work on your personnels...and vocab and metas.......1
vote=Datz