combi-nation

theres a war in the world and forever it'll stay
so blow out ya candles and wish for a better day
pepper spray in the eyes if you stand for ya rights
beaten down bloody, without a chance to fight
hands are tied, shackled or whatever you call it
the only idenity you have is green and in ya wallet
fallen hopes are lying in wishing wells, waiting
don't worry bout ya ticket to success cuz hell's paying
the shells braking, people start to open their eyes
and clear their throat and stop choking on lies
broken with crys, the links to the chains shattered
no more will we act like the shit they say matters
brains scattered, thinking and moving at fast speeds
cuz every little boy and girl in the world has needs
that means we all must work together and fight
each piece of lego's a part of building a better life
but the lesser die, and the circle of life kicks in
god's ansewering machine full, erything needs fixing
i'm just mix and matching words to sing a rhyme
but just remember he can only do one thing at a time

voted on $pit's and Toke's

This was a nice little piece. I normally don't like pieces like this, that are more abstract and don't tell a concrete story, but you did it well. This was one of, if not the best OM I've read from you. Nice.

ps. Lol @ "voted on $pit's and Toke's"
I'm sure Credz will get what you meant.

-W1

LMAO .. i didn't realize i said that shit .. am i that tired?! damn.

lmfaorofl @ you saying voted on..
lmao
hahahha

-dies-

ok anyways,
this was a decent piece, just a little too basic, rhyme scheme could've been better, and as Wicked said, it was abstract and didn't really have a solid story to it, which like him, I normally don't like.. you played it well though. Well done.

Vote - Seige.

:roll:

quit making fun of me!!!!!!!!! lol