Reply To Zone Out's Reply ....Feedback Plz..

now before i die im suppose to rid of "50 niccaz" n u # 1 on the list
u betta call the church cuz im bringin hell to ya life n u gon need an exorcist
some extra clips n a vest to prepare for these hollow tips
u startin beef not aware that im well equipped witta AK-47, mac 11 n pistol in my grip
im hittin u wit planes, grenades, cuttin u wit razor blades like a terrorist attack
they nicknamed my left n right fist "Terror Squad" cuz they'll make u "Lean Back"
right off the bat, knew this queer was on my nutt sack
wantin attention sayin im wack, he says its rhymin skills i lack
but i will be quick to beat him in a battle n thats for damn sure
i will teach u the basics of rap n this "flyweight" will make u look like an amateur
when im done embrassin ya ass u gon want me to be ya manager
but imma kick u to the curb like a damn scavenger
u a pimp?? i fuck bitches that r top notch
the only time u see a naked woman is on the pills in ur "X" box
the only gurl u can pull is jeanne garofalo well im pullin vivca a. fox
u might get a kiss on the cheek but im gettin a blow on the cock, thats on the block
if this was poker u "might" get lucky on the river but im gettin loaded off the flop
u the type to pull up in '28 delta well im pushin a beamer thats drop top
u might put out a one hit wonder but imma be makin hits non stop
imma make sure i got ice in my bezel well u gotta long ass chain witta bigg ass clock
now is it jealousy or envy? i'll let this nigga know i'll pull the trigga until empty
only flappin his gums cuz he know i wont see him
but let it be known that i have a chamber ready for the day that i see him
thats wat i hate fake ass niggas jus like u
got a city full of bitch made niggas jus like u
gangsta shit is played out?? i know that but not when u live it
n everyones crazy but only to a limit, i'll admit it, i've done things i regret
but also i've beat niggas into givin me respect
jus give me one shot to the chin n this nigga will ZONE OUT
now he done brought back the savage in g-moneys soul out
im wack? while how come everytime i do shows my shit is sold out??
it jus ur full of shit like ur breath when speak out ..nigga!!




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c'mon wheres the feed back 7 views n no replys i know someone wants to say something jus let it out

this was actually.. suprisingly WACKER then i expected.. and the sad part is a expected it to be WACk... go write like a million more times until you find out what a real "hollow tip" is.. and then try again.. i hope zone out ate your shit because if he didnt.. i dont think i would see much worst then him.

^^^ hater.....................tight sig though!!!!

shut the fuck up.... because i seriously told him whats everybodies gonna tell him.

don't tell me to stfu.............I was playin dawg!!!! So you can act like a bitch wit someone else!!!!!! I'm not the one!!!

who the fuck are you?
Im Zone Out.

Lol....this Shit Is Hella Old....i Did This Shit Cuz U Put Some Reply To One Of My Om's N I Got Mad ..... Damn I Can Tell I Elevated From This Piece ....