yeaaa (quick Keystyle) . . .im back

i been gone for a minute, I been STACKIN my LOOT FAST/
an now im BACK wit some NEW RAPS/ LAUGHIN at YOU CATS/
that think ya HARD faREAL/ GAURD ya GRILL/ b4 i make ya blood START ta SPILL/ I SPARK an L/ while I cruise the BLOCK in my WHIP/ ya cant ignore me, prolly why ya shorty wanna HOP on my DICK/ haters TALKIN some SHIT/
dont make me bring my GLOCK to ya CRIB/ pull out an pop a SHOT in ya WIG/
yall aint STOPPIN da KID/ from gettin THIS MONEY/ my CLICKS HUNGRY/ theres no way ya takin CHIPS FROM ME/ I put my dick up in ya CHICKS TUMMY/ I know you think this SHITS FUNNY/ I MIX SUNNY D an VODKA/ ya makin Fun a Me i'll PoP Ya/ then ya really Gunna Need a DOCTA/ now a days erry body Wunna Be a Shotta/

feed back yall . . stop sleepin

hmm so your back ay... well go aay again.... lol

cant say i enjoyed this, dunno why you felt the need to use capitals, and the way you set it out was bad.,....

didnt really interest me.... sorry man.... work on it, sounded more suited to audio, and even that i dont think i would listen to

my advice would be spend more time, and lose the key'd up shit

wuznt really feelin it

agree wit Dev about it bein more for an audio

da structure wuz kinda fuked

Word.. wasn't very good. OM's are more than just a bunch of multis, this isn't audio this is text, you gotta be able to express your open mics and get deeper and have some emotion, not talk about busting caps up people's rectum.

You need to leave 2 links to 2 open mics that you left decent feedback on or this gets closed, Thanks.

uppin

yeah wasnt feelin this shit at all....get ya rhymes str8 and get that shit flowin better