what`s the difference?

weak-minded perspectives susceptive to infectious genocidal reflexes when the powers of persuasion & charisma connected
energetic words projected,
subliminal sensations excite nerves` kinetics
target market, dejected pathetics who`ll do anything to be respected
under the influence of confusion and meticulously constructed illusions
who really controls the movement?
who cares?...most abused it
the population`s been overtaken with fixations of self-induced desperation
displacin intellect & self-respect wit a lack hesitation for takin dictation, when honor met it`s replacement
in most cases, a subconscious common sense would normally negate this
but blind faith is what motivates this man who`s faceless to disgrace his greatness
dignity, each entity coincidentally misplaced it
creation of revolutions for the sole purpose of amusement
their passion, bloodshed fuels it
so they receive what they`re askin for
action...more and more
until hell`s angels attack god`s front door
what have they come here for?
individually constructed justice
that concept doesn`t exist
but they don`t know this, so of course these idiots persist
while the wanna be righteous wage wars with words
afraid to act, instead they ask, to be given what they deserve
so they`re rightfully served
given the vision of birds to observe the apocalypse
collision of polar opposites
the words that crossed the prophet`s lips predicted this in 1666
a millennium after the first attempts to convert earth`s inhabitants to devil`s advocates
now we act as walkin catalysts, afraid to battle this unnatural bliss
rendered defenseless by mental ignorance that`s left our appendages riddled with impotence....

the tale of the mindless simpletons & the frightened citizens...they take different paths to the aftermath, but in the end, what`s the difference???

i replied to ..

camrok - enter the light

tha return - untitled

now, let`s get some feedback.

Shit dude, wordplay is persistantly just bouncin' off the screen, multi's with effective syllable use...dope concept...i felt the finishing lines just wrapped it up and tie the fuckin bow real pretty...shits hot

very complex and sublinal i thought it was hot keep it up good piece 1

more feed back would be nice please :)

yeah i agree with them... loved this

a millennium after the first attempts to convert earth`s inhabitants to devil`s advocates
now we act as walkin catalysts, afraid to battle this unnatural bliss

nice internals n str8 vocab

had some good vocab wordplay was tight
overall this was a complex piece
this also had a good concept overall this was a pretty good drop

uppin this

wow.. i'm quite impressed..
multi and syllable use was outstanding,
internal rhyme was nice....
nice overall message, and some nice vocab
to make the piece a lot more complex.
really nothing else to say... some dope stuff..

prob my fav lines...

"but they don`t know this, so of course these idiots persist
while the wanna be righteous wage wars with words
afraid to act, instead they ask, to be given what they deserve
so they`re rightfully served
given the vision of birds to observe the apocalypse
collision of polar opposites"

damn yo shit is hot...the words u used and how u put them together...I am real impressed shit was off da chain. 1

good looks on the feedback