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Text?, who thought a keyboard could drag you through the dirt
Cause all your lines be suckin like i put a vacuum to ya verse
your punches got bills to pay, when you swing they lack in power
your punches are so behind time, the thread clock went back an hour
ha, look at your verses, moe suck's, better yet his ass swallows
your lines are played, your battles are more recycled than glass bottles
Your like broken nut crackers causes you can't bust a nut
Or a second rate butcher cause you can't make the cut
There this is what you wanted? a quik loss Its all right im being honst
I mean what homo come's on the web and try's to speak ebonics
yo fake lil hova listen to what jay z says in renegade about bling bling,
hes dissen ya ass nigga and he wouldnt respect u so dont rap go sing,
im tired of taken out wannabes u all a fuckin followers and dick riders,
ya stay taken rap names ya'll are mosquitos cuz ya'll all fuckin biters,
this bum tim corleone is about to be merked now hes just mad at me,
your loc's inland empire? wasnt that the name of an area in final fantasy?
u remind me of that south park character i can picture u yellin out TIMmy!,
cuz u a fuckin retard battlin someone whos merked hovas b4 now give me,
a fuckin break your a punk and a discrase to frontlines get yaself outta here,
and u cant make house rules when ya ass dont have a home its over queer,
Not A great battle but lil hova takes this easily basically his personals hit and alot harder and his shit just seemed to flow alot better..lil hova used better vocab and his shit was just alot more complex...
Vote..Lil Hova
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Lil Hova
Text?, who thought a keyboard could drag you through the dirt
Cause all your lines be suckin like i put a vacuum to ya verse
-ok opener
your punches got bills to pay, when you swing they lack in power
your punches are so behind time, the thread clock went back an hour
-decent punch.. dont open both lines with "your punches" though
ha, look at your verses, moe suck's, better yet his ass swallows
your lines are played, your battles are more recycled than glass bottles
-well this was ^^^ as a punch
Your like broken nut crackers causes you can't bust a nut
Or a second rate butcher cause you can't make the cut
-heard before
There this is what you wanted? a quik loss Its all right im being honst
I mean what homo come's on the web and try's to speak ebonics
-wack
Master Moe
yo fake lil hova listen to what jay z says in renegade about bling bling,
hes dissen ya ass nigga and he wouldnt respect u so dont rap go sing,
-wack, choppy flow is off
im tired of taken out wannabes u all a fuckin followers and dick riders,
ya stay taken rap names ya'll are mosquitos cuz ya'll all fuckin biters,
-seen, played
this bum tim corleone is about to be merked now hes just mad at me,
your loc's inland empire? wasnt that the name of an area in final fantasy?
-wack
u remind me of that south park character i can picture u yellin out TIMmy!,
cuz u a fuckin retard battlin someone whos merked hovas b4 now give me,
-no punch, wack
a fuckin break your a punk and a discrase to frontlines get yaself outta here,
and u cant make house rules when ya ass dont have a home its over queer,
-nahh
Master Moe you came wack and your punches werent hitting, your opener flow was choppy and stretched, talking about a video game/ final fantasy was wack, and your 4th bar left off with "now give me"... there was no punch
Lil' Hova you came a little better, your flow was smooth but a lot of your lines came played and you came pretty basic, Your punches still landed though which won you this battle, didnt see any attempted personals from you, work on some.
V/ Lil' Hova
thanxs for the votes
2-0 me
uppin this shit
yeah i would have to say that Lil Hova took this one easily. the opener was okay, but nevertheless those are hard, and it was batter that Master Moe's... but anyway, i also thought that Master Moe's punches werent really on contact and they didnt really "punch" which is the point of a punchline but good job to the both of you anyway, good battle... but in my eyes this battle clearly went to Lil Hova, stay at it both of you.
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common lets get this battle over with uppin for more votes
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I can't vote in the poll, but lil Hova really took this, better punches better flow, better...everything, not a great battle though...
Lil Hova
Text?, who thought a keyboard could drag you through the dirt
Cause all your lines be suckin like i put a vacuum to ya verse
-ok opener
your punches got bills to pay, when you swing they lack in power
your punches are so behind time, the thread clock went back an hour
-decent punch.. dont open both lines with "your punches" though
ha, look at your verses, moe suck's, better yet his ass swallows
your lines are played, your battles are more recycled than glass bottles
-well this was ^^^ as a punch
Your like broken nut crackers causes you can't bust a nut
Or a second rate butcher cause you can't make the cut
-heard before
There this is what you wanted? a quik loss Its all right im being honst
I mean what homo come's on the web and try's to speak ebonics
-wack
Master Moe
yo fake lil hova listen to what jay z says in renegade about bling bling,
hes dissen ya ass nigga and he wouldnt respect u so dont rap go sing,
-wack, choppy flow is off
im tired of taken out wannabes u all a fuckin followers and dick riders,
ya stay taken rap names ya'll are mosquitos cuz ya'll all fuckin biters,
-seen, played
this bum tim corleone is about to be merked now hes just mad at me,
your loc's inland empire? wasnt that the name of an area in final fantasy?
-wack
u remind me of that south park character i can picture u yellin out TIMmy!,
cuz u a fuckin retard battlin someone whos merked hovas b4 now give me,
-no punch, wack
a fuckin break your a punk and a discrase to frontlines get yaself outta here,
and u cant make house rules when ya ass dont have a home its over queer,
-nahh
Master Moe you came wack and your punches werent hitting, your opener flow was choppy and stretched, talking about a video game/ final fantasy was wack, and your 4th bar left off with "now give me"... there was no punch
Lil' Hova you came a little better, your flow was smooth but a lot of your lines came played and you came pretty basic, Your punches still landed though which won you this battle, didnt see any attempted personals from you, work on some.
V/ Lil' Hova
lil hova took this.
I bascially agree with everyone else.
Hova-You had a decent opener and decent punches throughout it. Most of it seemed like I heard before but still ok. You're structure was a little un even but still alright. Vocabulary was decent, you spelled words right. (good job) Basically and overall alright verse. Nothing special but not horrible.
Master, your whole verse consisted of just rambling and little or no punches. Weak everything except for structure. The structure was nice and even. Your rhyme scheme was also decent but this is a text battle so it's not all about structure and rhyme scheme, you needed some punches but you lacked too much in that. Sorry man but I gotta give this to lil hova.
Vote-lil Hova