alright you know the rules...
no d/r
hate.
crew.
any of that bull shit...
10 lines...................
Due tomorrow night at 12 western time.....
good luck... :shoot:
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alright you know the rules...
no d/r
hate.
crew.
any of that bull shit...
10 lines...................
Due tomorrow night at 12 western time.....
good luck... :shoot:
I've done had it with them faggots that been tryin to start-me
I take the win and grab it, and have bitches actin sor-ry
This dude has a group called AFI in his usa name
If you feel stupid after i merk you, you only have you-ta-blame
I have reign over you so i simulate myself to Suddam Husane
I'll give you stomach pains till you shoot yourself like you was Kurt Cobain
Have sniffin sugar thinkin it stimulates you as if it was cocaine
My rhymes fire at you like a tech 9 with bullets that remain in ya brain
My 'lyrical flamez' are rabid, they're way too hard to tame
After i've rabaged you, i'll have ya floatin in a rivers rapids, till you go down the drains
spit some good shit......good luck....peace
MALE DOMINANCE
this should be a 2 way battle.... but theirs a twist,
he couldn't punch hard.... with viagra in his fists,
this battle kinda like when i drop my verse in 2 minutes,
me 'first' you 'second' =that all it take to leave you dismished,
battling with toy planes, there's nothing you could land,
and the only way this kid 'box', is fightin with 'square hands'
leave you battered and bruised.. a newb name logistic,
your verse upped my W's and you became a statistic,
this battles over... i killed and murdered this kid,
i leave his mental state like his punches... invalid,
alrighty... get the votes
oh yes, and so you understand the "boxing" punches.. in his profile it says his "interests/hobbies" are boxing...
Afi Kills Rap Takes This One Easyily Basically For Better Punches..Better Vocab And It Was More Complex And Flowed Better..Decent Battle..
Vote..Afi Kills Rap..
Return The Favour And Vote On My Battle With MarioMan..pz
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=141306
umm
Afi Kills Rap Takes This One Easyily Basically For Better Punches..Better Vocab And It Was More Complex And Flowed Better..Decent Battle..
Vote..Afi Kills Rap..
no question the other kid was wack....return the favor hit the first link in my sig
umm do you guys plan to post a poll up??????????????
Just Done It..Return The Favour On My Battle PzQuote:
Originally Posted by AFI_KILLS_RAP
AFI came wit harder punch lines harder disses overall better verse vote goes to afi
Logistic, you really didnt have any punches that landed, they were all weak, i didnt see any personals except for you mentioning his name but it didnt hit him. Your flow and structure was alittle off, some lines were stretched and threw your flow off.
AFI, you had some ok punches, nothing special, just punches that landed against him, thats all you really needed to take this battle, didnt see any punches except for a shot at his name saying it was a newb name. Your structure and flow was mostly on point.
V/AFI for having better punches that landed and better flow
...links in sig...
Easy... I'll try to make this somewhat longer with filler explainations, but it's really quite simple.
Logistic, ehh.. I wouldn't sya you're completely wack. You do have some potential, but seriously.. you really didn't throw a punch. Maybe 1. You self glorified yourself so much in your verse and made statements about how much better you are. And saying "oh, I'll do this to you".... doesn't really work that well. Not creative eithr.
afi- I actually liked some of the things in your verse. You had two really nice punches/personals that I can remember off hand. The rest was just okay, but kept the entire verse pretty consistent. The statistic line was nice. Nice personal. Basically punches you threw, and he really didn't much. Simple.
vote- afi
bahaha vocab was about even
flow-fairly even
wordplay and structure-afi
punches-afi by far
overall i vote for afi...just a better verse.
hit it
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...17#post1615317
^i already hit it.. and i want people who can actually vote... so it will close... thank you.
logistic
I've done had it with them faggots that been tryin to start-me
I take the win and grab it, and have bitches actin sor-ry
not a punch
This dude has a group called AFI in his usa name
If you feel stupid after i merk you, you only have you-ta-blame
weak
I have reign over you so i simulate myself to Suddam Husane
I'll give you stomach pains till you shoot yourself like you was Kurt Cobain
very weak
Have sniffin sugar thinkin it stimulates you as if it was cocaine
My rhymes fire at you like a tech 9 with bullets that remain in ya brain
hardly a punch
My 'lyrical flamez' are rabid, they're way too hard to tame
After i've rabaged you, i'll have ya floatin in a rivers rapids, till you go down the drains
nah
weak verse, no punches
AFI_KILLS_RAP
this should be a 2 way battle.... but theirs a twist,
he couldn't punch hard.... with viagra in his fists,
weak
this battle kinda like when i drop my verse in 2 minutes,
me 'first' you 'second' =that all it take to leave you dismished,
wordplay was ok
battling with toy planes, there's nothing you could land,
and the only way this kid 'box', is fightin with 'square hands'
a punch but weak
leave you battered and bruised.. a newb name logistic,
your verse upped my W's and you became a statistic,
average
this battles over... i killed and murdered this kid,
i leave his mental state like his punches... invalid,
weak but a punch
Vote-AFI KILLS RAP
for having punches