Aight..
You know The Rules..
No D/r
No Feeding..
15 Lines Max
You Drop 1st..
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Aight..
You know The Rules..
No D/r
No Feeding..
15 Lines Max
You Drop 1st..
I'm a new emcee but it doesn't mean you can fuck with me <
Bust a cap in ya knee coz I'm on a killin' spree, you're now debris <<
Is that shit I see? Bend your back so the spine touches ya heel <
It seems unreal but if the bitch makes a squeal it won't seem surreal <<
My rhymes you steal, for future battles you're gonna be a theif <
Judges are in disbelief, we had no beef but I made ya family greif <<
It's like my rhymes are both fact and fiction, there's no restriction <
A loss to me and you're up for eviction, I'll escape with a murder conviction <
I've started my own reputation, Imma new cat from a new generation <
After seein' ma rhynes you're up for masterbation, excitement and frustration <<
Cause Mario's celebratin', is there an explaination for this situation? <<<
Fuck yeah, you suck, worst thing to come outta this creation <<<<
I gave this dedication, you just sat there pressin' random keys <
Like you're talkin' Japanese, but I can lend you my expertise <
TAKE TIME OUT TO GET DECENT RHYMES FUCKER NOT SHIT LIKE BEE'S AND CHEESE <
I Replied To your Thread For A Good Battle..But Your Wack..
Dissapointment Fills Me..Damn I Want My Bitchslapped Post..Back.. :laugh:
Punches Devestate This Noob..Until His Head Bursts And Twirls
Pass Me A Lighter And Some Gas And Let Me Officially Smoke This Herb
Mario?? An Italian Faggot..Ill Refresh Your Mind The Mafia Era's Dead..
Living In The Past..Look Ahead..15 Lines To The Future..So Is Ya Rep..
You Challenged Hoping Id Respond So You Could Join And Avoid A Fatal Attack..
Truthfully You could'nt Hang With Me If You Where In My Nutsack..
My Rhymes Hit Hard Leaving Weak Italians In A Seizure.
10..Lines Down Your Gradually Tipping..Like The Leaning Tower Of Piza..
A Failure At Nintendo Games So On His Own He Trys Writing..
but Thruth Is Mario.. Cheese N Tomato Pizza Isnt The Only Thing Your Biting..(Pizza Comes From Italy..)
Self Proclaimed Decent Mc Who CLaims He's The Best..
Lets She How Your Mind Differs After 15 Slugs To The Chest.(15 Lines)
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DAMN!!! hot battle fa sho damn marioman u got ill skillz boi fa real tho u came wit a better flow but spook 619 came wit some harder hittin punches n more personals
Truthfully You could'nt Hang With Me If You Where In My Nutsack..
My Rhymes Hit Hard Leaving Weak Italians In A Seizure.
10..Lines Down Your Gradually Tipping..Like The Leaning Tower Of Piza..
A Failure At Nintendo Games So On His Own He Trys Writing..
but Thruth Is Mario.. Cheese N Tomato Pizza Isnt The Only Thing Your Biting..(Pizza Comes From Italy..)
LMAO GOOD PERSONALS
vote=spook 619
say spook u rollin wit a crew? if not hit me up on some info
ehh... wasn't that blown away with either verse.
mario is kinda expected I guess, not too bad for someone who is new around here. However you do need to work on alot. The punches were pretty plain and generalized, so I wasn't feelin the verse much. Not all that direct. You could also use some personals on spook. You can rhyme... keep up.
spook was a little bit better of a verse. One it was alot harder of a verse. The punches were much more complex, and not as plain. Worded alot better, and just simply came alot harder. More direct of a verse. Tried going for some okay personals too. Pretty easy decision.. spook took this.
vote- spook
Not sure if u polled on my battle- if you did don't worry about it... if you're unsure can you please check. thanks.
^dito with the "not blown away by either verse" i dont know what Creeper was talking about when he said that Marioman was "so good" but anyway, i though it was a mediocre battle... good job to the both of you though, but i personally think that Spook took this one with ease, in my eyes i didnt think that MArioman can that hard AT ALL, but as i said before nevertheless good job to the both of you...
but my vote ont his one goes to spook, his punches seemed more "on target"
V/ Spook
return the favor..
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=141364
MarioMan- you came weak. You had multis throughout your verse which was ok but you really didnt have any punches that hit him, your opening bars were threats and threats are wack. Didnt see any personals from you. The punches you had were weak and some were wack at the end of your verse and they just didnt hit.
Spook- you had a decent verse, your opener hit and made me laugh, you had plenty of personals through out your verse that landed, some were quite creative. The pizza/biting line threw off your flow alittle. Throughout your verse your punches and personals hit him.
V/Spook for better overall verse... punches and personals
...links in sig....
Mario - You obviously know how to rhyme bigger words so that's a good start, but you need to work on the concepts of battling. The idea is to throw punches. You had a great flow going and you were talking smack, but you didn't punch him. Like look at Spook's verse to see what i mean.. he'd setup a concept then punch you. Your verse didn't really hit him so learn to make punches direct and you could be aight
Spook - You had some wack lines, but not a bad verse at all. The line about him biting was really funny and I liked all the personals you had about italians and mario. Nice work, some decent punches and you easily take this.
Vote - Spook
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MM- You had an ight verse but i thought you focused a bit to hard on multies when you should of been throwing punches not to impress with your verse but it did had a good flow. content wise you could have improved 3 or 4 lines to make them hit
spook-you had some good 4 lines that i was liking on this diss but everything else didnt really work for me the personals also was a plus on this so you take this one
vote.....spook