Athiest vs Intense_it_E

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Deadline = Midnight tonight
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Ok here goes...

I only joined today, and I'm already knockin you out
It's only coz your talents lower than my post count
And I'm about to spit any old shit just for some fun
Winnin with wack shit on you, can consider it done!
Your like an MC nun....your just a virgin to victory
It's like you try to lose, you dont win intentionally
The Intense_it_E in here means we gettin spanked
Well you are, I'm not coz your spittin lyrical blanks
You should thank me, off my verse you can learn
Just a shame the crowd leaves when it's your turn...


Not battled in a while.....goodluck

*yawns* Wow, I think I might need it<----notice the sarcasm
Naw thanx 4 real tho

Ok fuck an opener I'ma get straight to the facts
You worthless like Pinnochio wit no strings attached/
I bet while you readin this you mouth wide wit fasination
Cause you the only one feelin yo yoself like masterbation/
Yo rhymes might have been up to date; last week
You spit so shit yo arms should be replaced wit ass-cheeks/
I'm seein the same thing like watchin T.V late night
You suck so much I bet you could cure a snake bite/
I'ma urinate on yo face, dawg, and watch yo head leak
Cause you gettin pissed on like rubber bed sheets//CID

uppin for votes(1)

Athiest

It’s easy to tell that this was your first battle, you had decent flow, but your punches were really soft. I think that with practice, and probably just battling more you will be successful. Your ideas were right on… but you didn’t attack your opponent with solid punches, just pushed your fist against him, figuratively speaking.
Keep up-

Intense_it_t

Ok,fuck an opener I'ma get straight to the facts
You worthless like Pinnochio wit no strings attached/

Still an opener, redundant, but effective.

I bet while you readin this you mouth wide wit fasination
Cause you the only one feelin yo yoself like masterbation/

Played out, but it still was a punch.

Yo rhymes might have been up to date; last week
You spit so shit yo arms should be replaced wit ass-cheeks/

No good, I didn’t even value the image you tried to show

I'm seein the same thing like watchin T.V late night
You suck so much I bet you could cure a snake bite/

I understood the punch, but it wasn’t good.


I'ma urinate on yo face, dawg, and watch yo head leak
Cause you gettin pissed on like rubber bed sheets//CID

This was a nice punch, funny, and solid.

v-intense

thanx 4 tha vote. Uppin for more

Atheist - For someone who joined today you had a good verse, but you have a lot of elevating to do. You kept a solid flow going and a good structure and you seem to have a decent concept of how to throw punches. Unfortunately they didn't hit very hard. You mostly just talked about how much he sucks, but you didn't do it in creative ways like using metaphors so work on making your punches more creative so they hit harder.

Intense - Once again, another verse that was far better than what you posted against me. Some of your lines were a bit wack like that masturbation thing wasn't funny, but the Pinnochio opener I thought was the best line of the battle. The rest of your verse was alright, not very hard hitting but harder than Athiest and the ass cheek line was pretty decent.

2 very basic verses which aren't too bad, but Intense's is a bit more creative and hard hitting

Vote - Intense

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uppin(4) votes

Watch it you dont want to up it to many times you could be DQ'd and lose that way. But this was a okay battle both of you had some okay punchs in your verse and then both of you had some played punchs.

Atheist your an RM head right. Cool RB is better anyway but you had some decent lines in your verse but you had some real whack lines in there as well.

Intense you had some okay concepts which made your punchs hit a little harder. You werent to basic with your punchs you had some good material nice job.

There were no real personals in this battle some it was kind of hard to choose the winner but intense had better overall punchs.

V/ Intense IT E

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Athiest

I only joined today, and I'm already knockin you out
It's only coz your talents lower than my post count
Played....

And I'm about to spit any old shit just for some fun
Winnin with wack shit on you, can consider it done!
OK

Your like an MC nun....your just a virgin to victory
It's like you try to lose, you dont win intentionally
haha

The Intense_it_E in here means we gettin spanked
Well you are, I'm not coz your spittin lyrical blanks
nah

You should thank me, off my verse you can learn
Just a shame the crowd leaves when it's your turn...
gay closer...

Could've came alot better in my opinion, the closer didnt hit hard enuff. :banghead: The flow was prolly the strongest point in this verse. keep battling athiest. 4/10


Intense_it_E

Ok fuck an opener I'ma get straight to the facts
You worthless like Pinnochio wit no strings attached/
Good opener...lol

I bet while you readin this you mouth wide wit fasination
Cause you the only one feelin yo yoself like masterbation/
lmao!

Yo rhymes might have been up to date; last week
You spit so shit yo arms should be replaced wit ass-cheeks/
nah

I'm seein the same thing like watchin T.V late night
You suck so much I bet you could cure a snake bite/
haha!

I'ma urinate on yo face, dawg, and watch yo head leak
Cause you gettin pissed on like rubber bed sheets//CID
Nah, gay closer


good verse, a couple of those bars had me rolling, never heard anythng like those lmao. 7/10...keep it up

Vote = Intense_It-E

looks like im gonan be the one to close this... becase i think Intense_it_E clearly took this one personally, his punches hit stonger and were just a lot more on contact than atheist's punches, but good job to the both of you i was just feeling Intense_it_E's verse A LOT more cuz his vocab was better and his personals made sense and so did his Metas, but good job to the both of you guys............


V/ Intense_it_E

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