U Know Who The Fuck I Am!!

LET ME LIGHT THIS MUTHAFUCKA UP...(INHALES)
FUCK THIS CRACKER JACK WHYTE BOY..(EXHALES)
HAHAHAHAHA U DONE FUCKED UP NOW

IMMA ACTOR N HOMO Y U STEALIN MY LINES?
N Y DOES DIZZLE LIE IS 99 PERCENT OF RHYMES
WATS UR FAT ASS DOIN RAPPIN AINT U SUPPOSE TO BE AT THE ZOO?
I COULD OF SWORN THAT G-UNIT WAS AT THE AUCTION FOR U
NOW U GOT AN OPTION OR TWO, U EITHER KEEP UR MOUTH SHUT
OR GET DISSED BY THE WHOLE FUCKIN CREW
FO REEL THOUGH WHO THE FUCK U TRYIN TO PROTRAY?
IMMA NEWBIE U VET?? .......YEAH OKKKAAY!!!
HONESTLY WHO GONNA GIVE U A DEAL...BENZINO??
WATCH ME MAKE U SAY HELLO TO MY LITTLE FRIEND LIKE AL PACINO
U LOOK LIKE THAT RETARDED ASS NIGGA SLOTH FROM THE GOONIES
U CANT RAP SO U PROBABLY BETTER AT THEM MOVIES
IF THIS WAS A BATTLE MUTHAFUCKA TRUST U'D BE LOOSIN
N HOW THE FUCK U MANAGE TO GET A FAN CLUB
IS IT ALL UR WHITE FRIENDS THAT U PLAY WIT IN THE BATH TUB
BUT HEY THEY SHOULDNT CALL U FAT UGLY OR CHUBBY
I MEAN ITS NOT UR FAULT THAT U LOOK LIKE THE YELLOW TELETUBBY
IMMA KEEP IT HOOD LIKE TITI BOI BUCK N BANKS
G-MONEY ON THE TOP N DIZZLE ON THE BOTTOM OF THE RANKS
I KNOW THE REAL RB VETS HATE ME NOW BUT TO GET RESPECT IMMA DO WATEVER IT TAKES
U JUS A MINOR SETBACK IT'LL ONLY TAKE A FEW SECONDS TO ... :shoot:
PUMP YA BRAKES
IF I HAD TO I'D WALK TO GET THE CHEESECAKE N BRING IT BACK TO DIDDY
BUT IF IT WAS UR FAT ASS U WOULD EAT IT N STOP AT EVERY RESTURANT IN THE WHOLE FUCKIN CITY
LIKE THEY SAID I HOPE U DOIN IT FOR ATTENTION CUZ IF NOT THEN THATS A PITTY
2PAC SAID IT BEST ITS A WHITE MANZ WORLD N WHO KNOWS WAT TOMORROW WILL BRING
NEXT THING U KNOW UR ON THE AUDIOS LISTENIN TO DIZZLE TRYIN TO SING
ITS LIKE A BIRD TRYIN TO FLY WITTA BROKEN WING
ITS NOT GONNA HAPPEN
N IMMA SAY IT ONE LAST TIME S DIZZLE'S FAT ASS NEEDS TO QUIT FUCKIN RAPPIN!!!!

BROOK MOBB


** IF U GONNA LEAVE FEEDBACK THEN LEAVE SOME SHIT WORTH READING
I DONT GIVE A FUCK IF U THINK I SUCK I WANNA KNOW WERE I NEED TO ELEVATE MY SKILLS

Open Mics

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=135883
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=134850

You'll have to leave 2 links....and don't type it in caps', found it hilarious thta he dissed Dizzle th0..lol.

ummm.
i personally think this was wack.

Ur ass
ur name is ass
ur rhymes are ass
ur crew is ass
......ur just ass so heres some toilet paper.

Real Feed Back..

Kill the caps-
I can tell you was pissed due to
all the cursing and harsh statements,
However you need to use way better
vocabulary to express your emotions.
Structure sucks, commplexity there
is none. In some lines I see you was trying
hard but didn't hit. Complex punches work
but sometimes slow heads might not under-
stand it lol. flow scheme was there.


anyways just practice man one has to practice
to become nice...
Practice your punches and personals.
and another thing ignore stupid replies
you will see a lot of them at RB,
and sometimes you will see some
decent heads giving good advice


Elevate.

Yo Money that shit was hilarious, and xtreme you a hater.

and chemist thanx for feed back worth reading, we need more of you.

FUCK YALL HATERS MoNeY AnD I ArE GoIn To ThE ToP!!!!!!

yeah this was fukin hilerious yoll....you showed that stupid white fuk were u stand i aint think he gone say shit on u no more dogg...4 real g this shit had me laughing...........id give u feed bak on how to elavate but yo im as new az you and on the learning level to so what id say wouldnt be to helpful ....you feel me?...............but one thing i do have to say is i didnt really feel the line bout pac ...you no it just didnt fit in there right ........ i aint hating homey just statin peace

fa sho i feel u n i thought i throw pac in cuz he's my favorite rapper but next time i will try to make it fit a lot better but thanks for the luv holla back

dude i am no hater:he jumped on my dick in one of my open mikes.
and he sucks anyways,so whats the deal about be pointing it out?
...
and no your not going to the top.you suck.alot.