ite bruv, spit b4 sunday
10 lines
peaze
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ite bruv, spit b4 sunday
10 lines
peaze
When you spit you dribble,your lyrics aint fresh they've already been skribbled
Left teeth marks in me?i dont think so,your lyrics may bite but im not even nibbled
Soon my kill list will be tripled as your verse is crippled by yourself not me!
And the only way you'll get some chedda is by gettin some top shelf nob cheese
Spot these,i look at yours and they are hardly visible lyrical attacks
There will be pain in your eyes like dogs with athritis, causin bad backs
Like train tracks, brace yourself bruv cos your off the rails with those words
And your lyrics couldnt cause any violent actions even if it was full of verbs
So observe how your written verse is dodged,like vipers i consume completely
If you want a break you can but it wont help, when we resume you wont defeat me
if u dont understand neting, just ask me
just a quik ting
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Tussle wit dan,wut?flex ya mussels an watch ya clam up
I laugh at Rural thug, give him some suburban chin checks
Pullin the plug,cuz like S~Dizzle ur 'hits' have no 'effects'
So whos next, poison yer soul and leave you carcus rotten
Rural avoidin the polls , I only need 18 letters to Ra~kim
Watch my lyrical raid ,pitch attempts to leave ya slaughtered
Ur attitude aint very 'brave' so u must be off your 'Rocker'
Ur the only retard left and u still try to speak on me
Rural's startin a Star Trek, that's why he Kling~on me
Attackin wit wondrous thoughts to make this poser fall
Im dick slappin this underdog,now lets see if u can dodgeballs.
uppin
some feedback please
not a great battle here
Structure:This goes to Rural he had better structure and more complexity in his verse while, dan's first line threw me off cuz it didn't rhyme with the second line after his structure was cool but not better than rural's
Punches:Rural had sum cool punches they didn't knock dan out but they did hit him
Dan had punches but they were all soft taps like rural only reason dan gets this cuz his punches had more wordplay thru his verse
Personals: RuralEither you didn't have any or they were 2 weak for me to see here, Dan had weak personals as well but they were good enuff to give him this battle
Advice to Rural only diss or punches the other battler, because talking about how you dodge their verse or whateva isn't cool it does notting to the other guy
V/Dan
Hit up my battle in my sig
this is my last up
uppin