Stubby vs Camrok

10 lines
blind spit
due tonight sometime..
..no real time set on it

normal rules,

checkin in i will go ahead and spit now..............

So it looks like another battle to someone on this east coast
And another dumb ass fucka who should be good, with 799 free post

Quote:

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im not spittin first..
set it up..leave it due tomorrow sometime, i'm busy.

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Shit your fuckin delays is makin my dope as dizzy
You said that your interest are girls, sports, and music
Shit after all the tips that i have given you still dont use em
You and your gay ass name CAMROK, we aignt on the Flintstones
So give up rappin man, and give up your fuckin Trent Loans
Oh shit already on line 9, and i've got people tellin me your merked
Damn, bro look as the votes come in they are right it WORKED

Kid, the fuck is with the name, calling STUBBY?
Wack "emcee" sittin at home, over blown, fat, & chubby
Sonny, u must be thinking "Oh shit, I made a mistake."
Calls himself a rapper, so bad can't even hide he's a fake!
No named nOOb, but I hear he has d/r's lined in a ring...
Buncha gay Rb emcees, so dumb they call it a "voting thing"
Atleast I'm told, and I suppose u called me out as a Mission
To rise to the Next Level, but they don't understand...
..fairytales are fiction
Point must be missing, being in a crew doesn't make you cool
Kid's so plain and dull... he's Stubby like a worn out tool

ok ima vote on yours and i expect you to return the favor SOON Thanks
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=133926
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=133962
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=133989

Stubby analysis:
Opener was not so good because #1 him being on the east coast is just filler, and #2 the part about him having 799 free posts where did u get that info? decent flow tho, 2md bar was good because you quoted, but the second line was a little hard to understand and I had to read it twice, 3rd bar was good cause u attempted a personal but not so good cause it would only be something that would rhyme in audio, 4th bar i like the flintstones part and it had a decent flow but I didnt get the trent loans part, closer was not so hot because is it really true? because if it is you would have to other people in the room watchin u as you keyed, so it doesnt exactly make sense. Overall it wasnt horrible i see some potential I like how you tried to go after him personally, no metas, vocab could use some work, structure and flow were so so
Overall 5/10

Camrok analysis:
Wasnt feelin the opener that much cause it seems like you were just forcing something to rhyme with stubby and the flow in the first line wasnt great, 2nd bar Eh callin someone a fake is a little played, not really a personal, 3rd bar was not too great either cause he isnt really a noob flow was ok tho, I like the concept for the 4th bar but you could have worked the structure a little better, i didnt like the first line of your closer but the end was pretty funny. Overall you got a little humor in, you werent too far off but you need to actually attack him personally instead of generalities, and work on vocab and metas, flow was decent
Overall 4/10

Both got potential, not a blowout, but v/ Stubby

Now please return the favor

aight
Camcok:
nice rymes, tha whole "nOOB" thing was wack (what tha hell is a nOOB) flows didn't really flow, the only plus in tha battle was the line "Atleast I'm told, and I suppose u called me out as a Mission
To rise to the Next Level, but they don't understand...
..fairytales are fiction" Which won the battle
Stubby:
the start off whas way off (man what were you thinkin), but ur flows went along well together, the flintstones and Trent Loans was ur best line and basically ur only line, srry man
VOTE: Camcok

lol thanks for the feed man, uppin 2 just leave links i will return the favor

wow.... that's all I gotta say, Allevyate..
I didn't even read ur reasoning, and I don't want to.
The garbage goes out on Mondays.

uppin 1, for real votes..

my bad last one was my first up this is my 2 up, so can we get some votes please

Blah & boo @ Camrok, lol jk man.

Camrok obviously took this, and he obviously didn't give a fuck.

Stubby, you need to work on your punches. Flow's aight man. But punches didn't really hit hard.

I'd poll vote, but me & Cam are in the same crew. So blah...

Yeah right man, he didnt take this yet man, uppin 3

^^If he doesn't merk you in this battle, then I will :thumbup:.

i will take u even if he does merk me, or if i merk him, i dont care i dont like people eho talk shit.............

^^I'll handle your little sorry ass later.

This Is My Last Up Can We Please Get Some More Votes On This Please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!