Fathom vs Metres

Check ins due Wednesday night.
Verses due Friday night by 11:59 Eastern Time.
Battles will be 10-20 lines, agree on it with your opponent.
Any swaying will deduct one vote per incidence of swaying.

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In.. I'll try to perform better this week Metres.
But I apologise if I come w. another wack
verse. I just can't find any RB motivation.
G'luck

12

Tonight is possible?

You have the knack to create good threads, your a big name
Every piece you drop has a chance to get into the Legend..ary hall of shame
I spit shit hot and fast, speed of Keith Murray is compared to me
& you do have a Mobb Deep style.. to hit canvass w. a prodigy
You suck man, honestly.. beating you dunny give me satisfaction
Fucking Hawkins wanna be.. your all talk and no action
With a meak style so crisp, I could be advertising for Lays
Metres is liked a lot on RB..as L'Hills love for the white race
But seriously Dukes.. I have come like ass in the previous weeks..
I am ashamed..
..but at least Feebs was easy on me by handing me this weak

10 match

It's painful to read your text kid, you're simply put, the worst
The Illiad's a long read...
...but bitch, your shit's Helena verse
Disperse your keys with malice, slice flesh until victory's gained
and if talent is hereditary, best have your whole gene pool drained
I've maimed RB's worst...i mean, in the past he was pure shit too
'cuz however many tickets I get...
...it's impossible to misdemeanor you
Kid, i see 'Alone' in your sig, yet there's no sympathy stoppin' me,
Brix, everyone already pities you...
...WITHOUT the autobiography
Plain to see i'll be the victor, 'gainst this joke who's over the hill,
'Cuz this battle's more of a mismatch than Vylint's ego and his skill

You have the knack to create good threads, your a big name
Every piece you drop has a chance to get into the Legend..ary hall of shame
---eh...almost
I spit shit hot and fast, speed of Keith Murray is compared to me
& you do have a Mobb Deep style.. to hit canvass w. a prodigy
---meh
You suck man, honestly.. beating you dunny give me satisfaction
Fucking Hawkins wanna be.. your all talk and no action
---ok
With a meak style so crisp, I could be advertising for Lays
Metres is liked a lot on RB..as L'Hills love for the white race
---not bad
But seriously Dukes.. I have come like ass in the previous weeks..
I am ashamed..
..but at least Feebs was easy on me by handing me this weak
---no



It's painful to read your text kid, you're simply put, the worst
The Illiad's a long read...
...but bitch, your shit's Helena verse
---lol..good one...
Disperse your keys with malice, slice flesh until victory's gained
and if talent is hereditary, best have your whole gene pool drained
---played..
I've maimed RB's worst...i mean, in the past he was pure shit too
'cuz however many tickets I get...
...it's impossible to misdemeanor you
---eh
Kid, i see 'Alone' in your sig, yet there's no sympathy stoppin' me,
Brix, everyone already pities you...
...WITHOUT the autobiography
---lol
Plain to see i'll be the victor, 'gainst this joke who's over the hill,
'Cuz this battle's more of a mismatch than Vylint's ego and his skill
---shoulda been more directed to brix..but ok



overall..i think meters wins this...both improved
since the last couple of weeks...but meters took this
with the helena verse line and the autobiography line...

V.Metres.

i could have sworn that Fathom=BriX=Metres, but whateva...

Metres had better punchlines and metas.

Vote: Metres

^ no dude two different people...lol

anyway...
i think brix improved slightly
but to be honest i still wasnt too impressed
u have i think one line that kinda stood out and
that was the "action line"..
punches just havent been hittin too hard lately
just need a little work on the wording

metres verse was not bad amd just slightly better than
brix's verse, your opener was decent and it gave some life to your verse
from the start, it got a little shakey hald way through
but it wa more consisten than brix..

v/metres

Upping over the closed

Metres wins 3-0 .. +10
Fathom loses .. -10