fuk all here.
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fuk all here.
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Afew peeps no feed ? dissapointing!
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This was cool. The chorus flow was off, but the rest of the piece flowed well. West came pretty decent. Rhyme scheme was aight, but iffy at points. The verse was, overall, above par. Perception came good aswell. I was feeling his verse a little more because of how he worded it. Good verse. Overall this was a chill read. Nice job, fellas.
My Open Mic:http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=133021
Ok,uppin.
i feel llike this was a good piece had good mutlies, nice wordplay and flow. What made it good to me was that it would sound good as an audio i could see this being a real song. Only thing i didnt feel was the chorus, it was alright but the verse was too hot for a dull chorus like this.
^yea feeling that man.
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That was good, it flowed nicely, and it rhymed well. I liked the creativity you put into it aswell. You clearly thought about this well, good job.
West you had a nice flow and structured rhyme scheme that worked for you though the whole thing. A nice piece to read with. Above par work. Perception I liked ur verse also. Ur key points were u vocab and flow and again it was nicely structured. Overall 7/10. Nice work fellas. Can u check out my OM? its in my sig.
Appreciated boys i'll hit up ur open mic's in return,uppin for some more feed.
Peace
Uppin again.
Yo west could you hit up my battle please, and my open mic's links in the sig
nice shit from the bother of y'all structure and flow was nice as hell i couldn't say i liked either of ya verses better than the other one would love to hear the audio on this
I was feelin this....except for the chorus for some reason. Both verses were nice. The flow was great. Structure was good for both verses. Vocab and multis also noticed. Creative drop guys.