10-15 lines
no hate
no crew
no d/r
fuck u...spit first
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10-15 lines
no hate
no crew
no d/r
fuck u...spit first
checking in....
second times a charm, eh emulated?...
oh shyt...ur actually nice....who cares, im the best
*laughs*
Gets merked one day, here comes the next, why even try?
because you didnt even pull a vote...
...and you tried a swaying reply,
You verse Sabotage, not one decent punch im finding,
a bad rapper blames the mic...
...but you blame it on dickriding,
How can you expect a win, even your lines are 'fare gone',
it says everything when....
...he set the battle up wrong,
its funny, because he thinks his rhymes cant get any tighter,
he's a crew forum groupie...
....and he calls ME the dickrider,
jesus, check his sig, i could win the battle just on that,
emulated, i dunno where youve been...
...son, relauched is whack,
I'll let him feed of my verse, cause fool you cant flip this,
because emulated gets the most "ASSWHOOPIN4ME"...
...in the hole new jersy district..
it'll do for you..
taking ur time, its been half an hour...
upp 1..... what a waste..
im wastin valuable credits, i shouldve refused ya/
take the "real" off his name and add, "a loser"/
that title fits him, hes weak and his structure is trash/
he couldnt get insink(however u spell it)"nsync" wit my rhymes if his name was lance bass/
after talkin shyt, hell lose and disappear/
he says, he was laughin at the beginning of his rhyme when he really want to tear/
u are worthless, communism couldnt help this peasant/
rappings(wrappin) is my "gift" and this fag always wants to be in my presence(presents)/
his record says 3-0 i think u messed it up/
i think he fed off his record the way he flipped it up/
im fully sprouted in this game..u jus now bloomin/
his name is real but he gonna disappear off this site like and illusion...faggot/
SORRY TO SAY BUT THIS BATTLE WAS WACK AS HELL
RealiM- I have seen you do WAY WAY WAY WAY better man, i mean in this one it seemed like you didnt even try, but i guess i can still say that u had little structure with TWO light punches, u had ONE personal that wasnt that good, i liked your 5 word multi on your closer though that was good
Emulated- I have also seen you do better, umm. in this battle i think that you did ok at best i mean u had better punches then realim but u didnt have any personals, and to me that means no structure which was proven cause u didnt have a good structure
V/RealiM
not the greatest battle...
nobody really had any good punches or personals. realim you had better flow and structure. em dont correct spelling in brackets and fix your structure. Delivery wasn't good from you em... realim took it in that category. neither of you were creative. Concepts were... sketchy. not realy a great battle... vocab was kinda sloppy. all around played... sorry guys.. just honest...
The only thing good here was flow... and realim had it
Vote- REalim
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leave links and ill hit them up..
Punches - Eliminated dude had none. RealiM had a few, but the others were weak.
Flow - Eliminated's flow was ok, didn't like it though. RealiM came a bit better, but had a few stretched lines.
Structure - Eliminated's structure was completely wack, didn't like it AT ALL! RealiM's structure was good, same one I use sometimes :).
Vocab. - Hmm, was one sided. Eliminated's vocab. was horrible. RealiM's was much better.
Overall - RealiM had better punches(but most were weak), he had a better flow, structure, and vocab. Eliminated, you should work on everything. Elevate.
Pz
This battle was realy bad seriously...
RealiM took it easy but if that verse was against anyboody decent you realy would of struggled.. ino you didnt have to try hard to beat him but you could of tryed atleast..decent flow punches were ok but personals were weak..
Emulated that was poor.. thats is all i would say but then it would get Dq' so.. flow was poor and punches were bad seriously they mite work on the new Rb but not hear.. personals were where if you did try any at all they failed..
\/0te.. RealiM
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=132507
realiM go and poll i just noticed that you haven't..
up 4.... one more vote....
btw, i only joined pandora's box then, after kahn voted.. so its not a crew vote..
OK none came very good really.
RealiM - you took it this battle tho, he did make some attempts of punches and i think a few personals..ou still could of come alot harder, ive seen alot better from you, just try to do ya best each verse..a pretty good flow punches were ok but personals were poor as i dont think ya attempted any good ones
Emulated - a very weak verse from you, your whole verse needs work, there was no punches or personals, you are meant to diss your opponent, work on hittin harder punches and connect them with personals..flow was bad and so was structure
vote for RealiM for a better verse