*~Da Female Bandit~*INTROOOOOO fya

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...67#post1457067
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...72#post1457072

aye aye aye

Its da female bandit and I have officially Landed/
Not candid but I leave most lyrical emcees STOPPED and strandid/
The female version of Hova and that's for serious/
My lyrical apperance Is enuff to stamp me as utterly Ridiculas/
This hear is my checkerd flag and IM SPEEDING/
THis is something u are forced to *believe in* making sure to gain respect AND THEN IM LEAVING/
Leaving you cats worried and sexual studied like a rape victim/
Consider me wired cuz i got more Bugs then ya computer system/
After u get used to me you'll be abusing me like crack/
ME BEING WACK AS FUCK not even KODACK could photo that/
Im an american tradition like *butter spread on toast*/
I MAKE the heat in ya kitchen im scraping you *making you shed the most*/
FIRE RAP IGNITIONS LIKE REMY MARTIN/
U ready to rumble get humble and find ya face on a milk Cartin/
SpokenBluntly the femcee with net and streets cradentials/
FUck wat u been through Glue u still in ur tracks every time i spit its INFLUENTIALS/ :thumbup:


SPOKENBLUNTLY

Uppinnnnnngssssssss*ones*

Sb

WOW... THIS WAS AMAZING MA...

Where you from? How old are you? Do you have a pic?

Never mind. Seen your pic.

thanks for da replies UPPS

SB*

yo spoken, if i think who i think you are, good ta see you here

nice piece tho, the flow was good and the punchlines was good 2,
the metas were very well thoguth out i think....thge wording in a
few parts was kind of off target, but the rest of it made up for it.
that one line was really strecthed tho, you could of split that into
two, it didnt mess up the flow, but it seemed a little awkward.....


all in all good piece, keep it up

peace

*edit my link in later*

I know u from some where else Lingwistik? wat sites u been on *one*?

SB

yah, i have you on my buddy list, haha, yah, i was lyricist lounge/fateforum

also on a few others

so thats how i know you

peace

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