aight.
10 lines
the normal rules
you spit first, to make sure that u dont no show
ill post right after i see that uve dropped
good luck.
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aight.
10 lines
the normal rules
you spit first, to make sure that u dont no show
ill post right after i see that uve dropped
good luck.
checkin in.
im waiting for u to drop.
try and post tonight holmes.
you didnt reply for a while so i was offline
anyway im gona drop so u betta drop aswell
this muthafucka aint worth 2 cents
nascent, i guess u where formly known as nasty cent,
you just copy a trend (nas),tat shows how much you really are bent
so go pay rent so u can impress a guy, put him in bondage fuck and then claim your a pimp
you reminds me of tat guy from pulp fiction, who was it??? ah yeah the fuckin gimp
see playa your lyrics u ripped and anyway there shit
and i'll leave u so fucked up you'll put yourself in a 6ft pit
but if u dont you'll feel the wrath of my clip
so fuck off outa here u fuckin git
and go find sum one to pay,we call tat a bitch
aight. check this shit out.
yo, yo.
even with his wack pre writes efecx will never win, so just quit
i mean, who the hell is able key up a verse in just one minute?*
uve run past my limit...now im pissed, so bitch stop bein gay
hes gotta ask y no one votes...Quote:
Originally Posted by efecx
...but its cause no one wants to ruin their day!
listen to what i got to say...cause im just soarin over this bum
and now hes tellin me to post...
...but in his last battle he couldnt find the forum**
now ur more dumb...just toss ur shit and cross ur spits, im ur boss
and since hes even askin for it...Quote:
Originally Posted by efecx
...let me finish sketchin up ur loss!
come across...send ur best shit, but im gonna bend it, dont pretend
and its funny how ive yet to even spit...Quote:
Originally Posted by efecx
..and hes askin when the tortures gonna end
*look at the times he posted his check in, then his verse...one minute differenctial
**in his last battle he posted his verse in bitchslapped because he said he didnt know where to post it
uppin for votes.
wow efecx had a whack verse...a lot of filler...
he came with missing punches and personals...
i felt that nascent didnt really need to try to hard...
but what he did try was enough to win this battle...
he had overall decent yet ok shit...for his enemy...
hits where connecting on a much more efficient level...
efecx needs to elavate and use better punchlines...
and u also need to fix up u'r struc...same wit u nas...
i'd like to see more wittyness from both...mostly E...
just overall more wordplay...make shit complex...
both can elavate but my vote goes to nascent...
hit up my battles in return...thank you...
Um gay Newbie Battle :rolleyes:
Anyways,
Efecx or whatever the fuck your name is, you had a weak verse that was filled with filler. it had no punches or personals. Flow was pretty bad and the structure was off and kinda stretched. You gotta have hard hitting punches to win battles. You didnt have this. You had filler. Personals werent there...you need to use them.
Nascent- you have an easy name. good job! Lol anyways, you had punches and personals in there. Verse was pretty much all personals. 1 or 2 were filler but thats ok because bascisally most of them hit him. You didnt need to coem that good. flow was good and so was the structruwe of the verse. One line was stretched but thats ok...Good job work on flow for next time.
V.Nascent
efecx - You had no structure what so ever, or flow for that matter. You never had any personals, punches, or anything of the kind to make your verse appealing. Your entire verse was WEAK!
Nascent - You had a better structure and flow. You personals weren't extremely effective but at least you had some. Your punches weren't that hard hitting either but once again, at least you through in a few.
V/ Nascent
thanx for the votes...
UPPIN # 1...
leave a link and ill return the favor....
UPPIN # 2...
...cmon hoes...vote...
ive voted on so many damn battles...return the favor...
...or if i havent voted on urs....leave a damn link...
its not that hard...
efecx-your verse was weak as fuck, where were the punches and personals, there were none and you need to work on that flow as well, and your verse was just full of filler and your structure was well fuckin gay i aint never seen that done before, but work on your shit and im sure you can elevate.
nascent-you didnt really have to do much to win but i felt you did enough to win this battle with your verse, your punches and personals were ok but not very hard hitting, and your structure was good but yor flow was alittle off i thought, but maybe thats just me, and your vocan was nice as well.
vote-Nascent.
can you hit my battle up against 2hot2handle please links in my sig,pz.
^^just did....
UPPIN # 3....
...someone close this shit yo....
daedal aka nascent won this
Structure tied
enjoeyd: Nascent
Punches: Nascent
Vote: Nascent
This was easy....
Efecx was obviously a newb. His punches weren't hitting and his personals weren't really there. The ones he did have were pretty weak. His flow was OK but he had little to no wordplay. You need to be a little bit wittier with your punches. Readers appreciate a good laugh. Also personals are key to winning battles, try and use some good ones here......
so go pay rent so u can impress a guy, put him in bondage fuck and then claim your a pimp
you reminds me of tat guy from pulp fiction, who was it??? ah yeah the fuckin gimp
^^^Probably your best line and it was horribly stretched. You can't win when this is the best that you got....
Nascent was a little better with his punches and he had personals galore. The quotes were getting a little bit annoying but they were OK for the most part. He had an OK flow and his wit was there. Overall he just had the better verse.....
even with his wack pre writes efecx will never win, so just quit
i mean, who the hell is able key up a verse in just one minute?
^^^ Murdered from the first line.....lol
Vote - Nascent
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