Here's the rules (just copied and pasted what you wanted)
15 TO 20 LINES
NO D/R VOTES
NO UNEXPLAIN VOTES
NO CREW VOTES
NO FEEDIN
Check in and spit.....
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Here's the rules (just copied and pasted what you wanted)
15 TO 20 LINES
NO D/R VOTES
NO UNEXPLAIN VOTES
NO CREW VOTES
NO FEEDIN
Check in and spit.....
Ok I Spit 1st Aight Checkin In
No problem.....I'll wait, but I'll probably just drop a minute or two after you.....
Checkin in.......
Ill "stab" you in "both of your kidneys, five times for each one, then tear them piece-for-piece"//
thats "ten knife puncture wounds", and instead of "liquid waste gettin exerted, your blood sould excrete"//
Ill "chop your body in pieces" like a "jigsaw puzzle", then cremate your remains//
Ill "disconnect your life", by "slittin your throat makin you choke on your own blood", and "rippin out your arteries and veins"//
you "winnin this battle is insane" like "Charles Mansons thoughts and brain, jus ill minded"//
Ill "turn you into eminem" by blastin you in the "dome wit peroxide", and leavin you wit "swelled head", and "idolized like stevie wonder" and "left temporarily blinded"//
Ill put "24" in your "front and sides" like "nascar Jeff Gordons car and number"// (even tho my clip holod 16 haha)
Ill "send a bullet to meet your spinal cord" and leave you "crippled paralyzed and unconscious" sleepin in a "dark slumber"//
Ill "shove my rectum down your throat" and make you "eat my dookie" and you still couldnt "spit ill yuk mouth shit"//
you can "stab me wit needles infected by AIDS in my bloodstream" and it still "couldnt transmit into me" you dumb bitch// (scared to get inside (1O LINES)
ULTIMATE FINISHER
I'll slash-ur-knees, mutilate ur back-n-spleen, to leave u lookin' like sum1 managed to hack-ur-genes//
Ur rhymes couldn't shine, even if u waxed-them-clean, u couldn't hit if i gave u a bat and let u whack-extreme//
Call me raps cairopracter, when i make ur back-look-lean, crossdressing earned u the right 2 where a sash-4-queen//
U couldn't be ill, even if u had aids then bashed-ur-meat, if u rapped visuals ur rhymes wud luk like plaque attacking-teeth//
Ur verse is so wack, that it's requested-slaps, the only way u'd ever @#%$ me up is if u molested-rap//
U couldn't bring illness, if ur rhyme had infected-rats, lets see how u hold a mic with ur arms-twisted-back//
Then circumvent ur weak tactics, keeping u dazed like hypnosis, then watch u crumble like cookies and divide like mitosis//
Cursive-assertiveness, my verses-are-merciless, and my rhymes are tighter than a virgins-perked-cervix-is//
This battle is wrong, like snow falling in a hundred degrees, cause this guy's win record is shorter than a midget down on his knees// 19 lines
EVERYLINE HAS A //
Alright....time to say goodnight.....
I'm tough on the sinus....cause I'll leave his head infected
Easy to get a rise out of this dick with the way that Rez Erected
Yo, I'm Sunning this cat....but hey, you're no star
With swings like Tiger Woods....cause he's way below par
Like overcooked steak.....he's thinking he's so damn tough
But he's stuck on twelve o'clock...I leave him with both hands up
He's begging for a battle....check any thread in bitch slapped
He could recycle all his lines and they'd still say this kids' trash
The way I keep this kid grounded he always wishes it's Earthday
He's only gifted twice a year....at Christmas and his birthday
I'll come straight out and say it....no one likes you kid, ya dig
He'll never capitalize in this battle....so he tries to in his sig
I'll teach by example and leave this herb a mess in dismay
Don't ever step to me....I'm like possesive knitters....cause yo, I own this thread in hereQuote:
Originally Posted by RezzerReckted
He reps Apocalypse Knowledge....cause he knows his end is near
Ha Ha Ha Ha Nice Homie Nice
kon= good verse, somewhat decent, i really liked the both hand up line.. somewhat creative, flow was good, structure was fine. easy to read... good punches, the below par line is Well. very very played..... i liked the capitalize sig line and the only giefted on ur birthday and christmas
rezzer= most of ur lines werent punches, and the lines that were punches, i couldn't figure out because of ur horrid structure and way overblown attempt at using m,ulties. try less on multies and more on punches.. and please change that structure. no more ~""~""~""//""//~~???////.rgv,lfjopasdf.. that all
v/kon
i think that Rezz won the battle...he had alot of punches that hit hard
vote...Rezz
Ok Votes Uppin Uppin Lets Get Votes In Here
^rezzerreckted bitch, ur a fuckin biter!Quote:
I'll slash-ur-knees, mutilate ur back-n-spleen, to leave u lookin' like sum1 managed to hack-ur-genes//
Ur rhymes couldn't shine, even if u waxed-them-clean, u couldn't hit if i gave u a bat and let u whack-extreme//
Call me raps cairopracter, when i make ur back-look-lean, crossdressing earned u the right 2 where a sash-4-queen//
hmm...are u sure thats yours?? those lines sound familiar to me...i coulda sworn i heard someone say it before...no no, i have heard it before..u damn biter
Hmm...
u know that ain't yours, tell me is it????????
.......
rezzerrected, u r stretching those lines. u said its 19 lines,but it looks more like 19 bars to me. for example:
Quote:
Originally Posted by REZZERRECTED
oops... i clicked on post reply b4 i finished what i was saying.
anyway there is no way thats only 3 lines. count the number of rhyming words...thats more like 6 lines.
Rezz- firstly, ure excessive use of slashes and speech marks pissed the shit outta me, but ure lines would have been better if they werent stretched. structure was off, and flow was non-existant. Upp youre punches man, like Dizzle said, and dont focus that much on multies, when u kno its gon fuck up ure flow. U have decent content though...they really ures tho?
Kon-U had this down pat. from the first line man. It couldve been aite without those last two, but.. all good none the less. Structure, flow, punches, and ya personals excelled. youre two hands up line, sig and gifted diss was nice. Nothing else to say really but, Job well done.
vote/Kon
RezzerReckted - You had a very poor structure and all the (""..."" and -) were annoying. People can see multies and such, you don't need to point them out. Your flow was terrible because of the high syllable change from bar to bar. You had no personals, this verse could of been used on anyone. A lot of your punches were played and didn't hit at all. The multies were there, but that's it. Weak verse overall.
Kon Quest - You had a good structure and it flowed throughout. The personals were there and really hurt him. You had some nice punches that hit nicely as well. You took RezzerReckted to school with your vese. Above average overall.
V/ Kon Quest