ak-mixa vs. vanilla ice

10 lines or more
1 hour is deadline
no feeding
no biting

dis is not my check in.....

when you check in ya only got an hour on da clock.....

checkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkin innnnnnn

check in........................................peace

You are not cool/
you are not a spool/
you are not in a pool/
you are not a stool/
you are not not a tool/
you are not going to win this duel/
you are not in school/
you are not a precious jewel/
you are not Jeff/
Peace

I'll shoot dis nigga up more than heroin addicts with needles
vanilla ice either going to get melted or popped like a weasle
WTF he gonna name himself after a wigga dats a fake ass thug
he wanna sport da red colors so, i'll baptize him in his own blood
I'm a cleptomaniac so I can take any shit dis bitch throws back
ya don't need an updated Almanac to know his whack is a fact
Vanilla being passed over more than highways and interstates
he liked da entree' ate because I'm crackin his head with plates
vanilla ice getting his ass beat more than porn with egg beaters
Ice filled with lines thats down played, tarnished, and jus meager

ummm....was that his verse?

AK mixa wins this because he came harder with his punches and metas and personals....not too much wittiness or wordplay, but enought to take this battle obviously.....

Vaniulla Ice....dun know how to break your verse down....extend your lines...read other battless to get the idea

please peep http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=129774

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Ambiguous

Look, obviously you didn't read mine correctly.. I said he wasn't a precious jewel. Nor is he a spool. You can't, under any circumstances, get more personal than that. It's just not humanly possible.

You're just playa-hatin, nag

It's not playa hatin......

Vanilla- worste member on Rapbattles.com (ever)

cool,spool,....whatever....what does that have to do wit a battle?

Best Bar-
I'm a cleptomaniac so I can take any shit dis bitch throws back
ya don't need an updated Almanac to know his whack is a fact
Nice punch wit Vocab

Easy Vote- Ak-mixa

uppin............................................. .................................................. .

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=130634 Vote :mad: please...

vanilla ice your verse was very different but not in a good way it was poor.. bad.. awful.. you had nothing in it no punches personals length to lines..
0.2-10

ak-mixa not the best i have seen you done but after his drop you didnt need to drop amazing.. good punches and lines were an ok length so :thumbup:
5-10

vote - ak-mixa

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uppin for votes and i'll vote on yours............................................. .................................................. ....

uppin........com'n if ya readin dis then jus vote........................................

AK mixa wins this because he came harder with his punches and metas and personals....not too much wittiness or wordplay, but enough to take this battle obviously...for future reference....Stay away from net ganster lines...like saying your gonna shoot him and shit like that...stick to hard punches and personals and be creative in them also

Vanilla Ice....dun know how to break your verse down....extend your lines...read other battless to get the idea....throw some decent punches and personals...no...you didn't really have any personals....be witty man..not so simplistic in your shit

Please peep
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=129912

VI - I really don't know how to break your verse down. You should elevate, big time! Make your sentences longer, go to RB Help Center and read the tutorials. You obviously don't know anything about rap. Work on everything. Read battles. That verse was just wack as hell. You kept saying the same shit over and over again. Ugh that's all I can say about your verse. Oh and lol that Jeff line made me laugh, dunno why.

ak - That was good, could've been much better. Like your other verses, flow was almost perfect. Structure was ok, change it though, but it was still good dawg. Punches hit him hard. But you shouldn't have wasted all that on him. You could've came up with simple shit and it could've merked him. You had some multies too. Fav. line:
"I'm a cleptomaniac so I can take any shit dis bitch throws back
ya don't need an updated Almanac to know his whack is a fact"

V/ak

Please hit this up in return:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...54#post1429954

Try not to get a disqualified vote.

Peace

VanillaIce
uhhh...

ok,ok...i wont get my vote dqed....ur structure was wack....simple as hell.....flow was on target....Woot!.....u had a pimp rhyme scheme goin until the last line....You r not Jeff?...what the hell......no metas....no wordplay.....no punches.....no personals....

ak-mixa
structure was good....flow was pretty good......metas were nice.....wordplay was decent.....some of ur punches connected.....personals were pretty good....

Conclusion
both had a good structure, though aks was more complex......vanilla had a better flow, as his lines were like 4 or less lines.....ak had more metas, wordplay.....harder hitting punches....and harder hitting personals....so basing off of that....ak takes this battle....

VOTE - AK MIXA

ill come back and poll once at least one of u leaves a vote of this battle

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=130937