Respect ft. Credz

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History Class . . . Lesson I - Paperback

Ever Wonder - T West

Verse #1: (written by Gene Pool)
yo yo, I gotta lotta shit ta say/
to these new Crews who play/
think they top of the game/
cuz they outbreak with fame/
fuck that, just strip it straight/
cuz they just lame and they don’t know How/
to play the hip hop the same way as the old days/
so that’s what it’s about/
CV spreadin the shit out with one shout/
tryin ta get the word out, respect/
motha fucka, that’s what it’s all about/
cuz corrupted visions is here/
to run the ups and the downs/
through the vibes in the ground/
cuz we the kings of the crown/
yo credz is up next so check it out/

Verse #2: (written by Credz)
Been There Done That, We Paid Our Dues When The Bill Came…
And Yet We Still Reign Surpreme And Capture Like Still Frames…
Feel Pain Of The Corrupted That Errupted, Gushing Through Waves…
Rushing You Pain, We’re Hungry So We’re Muching Your Names…
Touching Your Brains With Orginality That Never Existed Till Now…
And We Still Plow Through All The Heads Cause They Will Bow…
Just Fill Out..The Form Of Consent Before You Bump Our Heads…
Cause Like The Trash Man We’re Cleaning Up The Dump That’s Left…
It’s A Spherical Rotation Of Dopeness That Personafies Our Hot Flow…
Just Never Ends Once You Think Its Out Its Back Again, So Start To Show…

…Respect

obviously.. this wasnt that awesome of an open mic to me.. credz had the WAAAAAAY better verse.. his flow was better.. his vocab was better.. everything.. but dont get me wrong gene.. you'll get better.. dont worry.. holla..

7.5/10

GENE IS WHACK! YEAH! :cussing:

^werd...............

haha this was cool..., yet you made it sound real deep... had good creativity... nice metas and similes in there... good imagery somewhat... good shit here

credz' line was by far better. I thought he sucked but I was dead wrong....he reminds me of Cameron and Cameron is in my top three

Gene your verse was simple,but you will improve with the more verses you drop,try and stick to a certain rhyme scheme,helps the reader.Credz verse had afew multies,some meta's and inner multies with imagery aswell.

Peace

I hear y'all I've been gone for like 3 months so this is just a little somethin from me to break the ice. beleieve me better shit will come. and thanx for the feed peeps. peace.

Same here man been out for a while,peep my peice an drop some feed if u can we are in the same boat.

Peace

Credz was wayyy better even though i dont think he dropped as good as he could :rolleyes:

Gene pool you need to do more Om's which will help you improve..

Credz get at me on Aim tomorrow i wanna collab for one.. :)

tellin ya man I've done lots of open mics I've just been out the game for a long ass time. this is juss somethin for me to break the ice like I said.