aight u know the rules.....ill hit this shit up later
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aight u know the rules.....ill hit this shit up later
Tell me somin why you hear today
you know you aint gotta chance dont play that game
you own girl dont wana be wid you, she says ya gay
I believe it ya fagit fucker jus back away
If ya keep comin ill shoot ya down like a communist Russian
and leave ya to bleed on the floor so best start runnin
Word of advice jus leave aight cuz you dont have a chance to shine tonight
See i got the words or a singer the mind of a killer
Come on you know it dont get much iller
So jus back of its my time to shine ill stop here its now my 10th line
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~you already done~
you aint stop~in~da~feet just flop~in~ta~me when im cock~in n pop~in then drop~in~da~heat/
ima chalk~in~ya~street when ya walk~in~ta~me cuz im sock~in~n~knock~in then rock~in~ya~cheek/
~Now ya dead~
if this hoe step ima be throw~in~hits~mayne, aint no one know~in~this~pain/
six clips to da skull leave me show~in~his~brain, thats how im blow~in~this~lame/
i'll leave hm alive till he go~in~in~sane, thats just how im bout ta kill~a~bitch/
sayin ya aint scared but still~ya~twitch, what you forget you fuckin wit skriLL~a~trick?/
you shoulda known i got them ill~a~hitz, but ya wack n ya lack the skill~ta~this/
im droppin my shit while i drill~ya~chick, she aint got the cash so ill bill~ya~bitch/
~da 5star killa~
im known for crum~ble~in~tricks who mum~ble~n~bitch while runnin wit grum~ble~in~spitz/
my flow comin rum~ble~in~ships wit hits till this wack bitch tum~ble~n~stum~ble~n~trips/
aight im done......vote on dis shit
yah well, ill got it
ill- your structure was bad, but you came thru in everything else. you had more coplex punches and wordplay. you didnt have a lot of personals but thats ok i guess, the flow was ok, it was a little wierd for me ina few spots.....um, but next time just work on your punches and wordply and make em go together better, and personally i hate those ~ things, it just annboys me, but its up to you to change it, also wrk on your personals
shizzle- your vstructure was better and your flow ithiunk was a little bit worse, but in a few places it was stretched a little bit, your punches were way too basic tho and the wording was really off in a few plaes as well, you had some wordplay but none that wer outstanding, but that also goes for the other guy...just work on more complex punches, personals and wordplay and youll be ok
vote-ill
elevate and keep practicin
peace
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damn this mufuckin battle been up since the 1st fuckin day i been here n only one mufucka voted so far.......what the fucks up wit that............
UPPIN FOR PPL 2 VOTE
holy fuckin shit mang.....wtf.....will sum1 please fuckin vote on this god damn battle......i see every1 elses shit gettin votted on but the new mufuckas.......fuck
will someone just fuckin get this piece of shit battle over with....god fuckin damnit