10 Lines
no crew
no have
no dickride
no bite
no feed
Good luck...
30mins after checkins
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10 Lines
no crew
no have
no dickride
no bite
no feed
Good luck...
30mins after checkins
check...waitin for you to check then we blind spit.
yo how about this.....me vs you vs tribe are you down?
ch-ch-ch-ch check
i'll get it written it'll prolly take me like 10-15
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tribe. in the wackest crew on RB...the leader aint even your best,
throw this sword swallowin' joker a knife...
...lets just see him Die-Jest,
really don't gotta try against you it's pointless to waste my lines,
watch your 2 best illnesses crash...
AIDs n untruhfulness whoever said your Kool-Lied,
Deprived of your breath... when I rip your lungs and cut off all of ya air,
I'm gettin Tired Of merkin weeded out herbs...
...so throw me some chronic to spare,
10 Lines is how far were going...your elevation may not be up to that,
even 2 on 1 you n ya partner would fall...
...after 1 line you guys just Co-Laps,
Knockin' out more Eternal AArties...n teeth than fight night,
I mean this kid could'nt shine back in the day...
...if he even had a Light Brite,
I’d grab ur verse n slice it with incisive incisions as these lyrics attack to make derisive collisions//
Envision ur body sliced in divisions…the battle just started n voters already know I’ll be the decisive decision//
I’m precise with precisions when shooting to puncture and rupture your molecular structure//
Fuck a fight…I’m the type that’ll swiftly snipe a bullet through ur windpipe at a secular juncture//
Battling me? If you were an old man growing you still couldn’t manage (man age)//
Continue arguing and I'd take your whole innocent clique out like collateral damage//
My writing can gauge n span rage to release rampage, as each page is livlier then I am on a damn stage//
Battles engage…You win? That’s about as truthful as the accusation that Em didn’t scam Cage//
Syn ur not popular and throwing 'paper into rotating propellers' wont get u a 'fan-page'//
Drop the foolish hype this kid is the stupid type; throws the pin and holds the grenade; that's why he'll lose the fight//
aight 10 lines
yo up nukka!!
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AIGHT good shit
LETS GET THE VOTES IN!!!
UPPIN!!!
UPPIN
not again.
will someone please fucking vote..
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ummm.. i don't really know how to explain this vote... it was one sided i didn't even have to finish reading tribes written... i mean, i can go catagory to catagory and rip up sintricates spit (no beef)... umm... vote tribe
wow apparently your judging this by Multis
cause he ripped the multis...thats all he ripped
if oyu don't understand wordplay and my punches
dont fucking vote period...
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dog if you want me to judge catagory by catagory i will...
Personals- now.. syn, you had a few that MAY be considered personals but they could be taged onto anybody.. but im a nice guy and i admire your attempt so you get this catagory...SYN
Complex- If you were illiterate you may had problems with syns... but im not... this goes to TRIBE
metas- I did re-read the spits over and i do agree with syn that he had an upper hand on this one... SYN
multis- This kids style IS multis... one of the only true cats to do this on RB.. other than myself... vote TRIBE
wordplay- tribe held this down.... actually both yall held it down but i think tribe threw some tricky shit out there... TRIBE
punches-Syn ur not popular and throwing 'paper into rotating propellers' wont get u a 'fan-page'//... dog this was some sick shit....
tribe. in the wackest crew on RB...the leader aint even your best,
throw this sword swallowin' joker a knife...
...lets just see him Die-Jest - that was a nice punch too, nice wordplay too
TRIBE
Flow- Syn had a good flow going and then he kind of changed is rhyme scheme... tribe kept the multi style the whole way through and nailed the beat... TRIBE
vocab- kid had a dictionary in my hand to read it... TRIBE
vote- ... im not gonna lie to you.... tribe is Ill....... TRIBE
1-0 uPPIN!!!!
uppin
uppin
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Tribe.. holla at your leader and see if i can get a tryout going or something..... peace
Tribe was on some cheap-Canibus imitation bullshit, too much vocab and forced multi's with no real punchlines to his verse. I thought that Syn got it, although i didnt feel his all that much either. Sorry.
Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Ambiguous