Scripture vs Kapitolins

10 Lines.
No D/r.
No Crew.
No Hate.
No Feeding.

Verses Due 1 Hour After Check In

Good Luck

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Originally Posted by Scripture

10 Lines.
No D/r.
No Crew.
No Hate.
No Feeding.

Verses Due 1 Hour After Check In

Good Luck

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We had agreed on 10 to 20 lines but anyway....CCHHEECCKK!
May luck help you out...of your first merking...

Now this site's name is rapbattles not rapwimps, you're on...why's that?
Man you're still terrorized 'cause one of your arab friends said "Hi_Jack!"
0-0 record..the first is your ass hole,the other your brain...get some notion
the cells in it are like paraplegics...they got problems with motion
come across with played out shit like MJ punches in RB's world
this chump thinks he knows it all just 'cause he dates a Librarian girl
the last book you layed your eyes on was "How to be wack"
lol you got all exicted and yelled "I'm so good...I can already do that!"
go ahead rap about marjuana and alchol thinkin your words can brew
you wouldn't be dope if I made you bud-wiser...man you'd still get nothin but boos...
:shoot:

Going Easy

You've been here for Months, While i just joined in May
So in this battle I'll give you all you can Hold, Like a chinese Buffet!
I was Lookin For Competition, But this is already Done
The King's coming out on top, Like the NBA's Round One!
Your Rhymes have Flaws, Your Skills Are Curvy
So I'll leave you Rushing to Smell Roses, Like the Kentucky Derby!
Seen your past Battles, And My Predictions Were Right
It's Obvious you need some, So Here's the Help Center of the Site!
Crewless, Must be Trying to stay Quiet, Kids rhymes are a riot
So I'll Leave you counting numbers in loss columns
...Like people On the Atkins Diet!

Now this site's name is rapbattles not rapwimps, you're on...why's that?
Man you're still terrorized 'cause one of your arab friends said "Hi_Jack!"
Ummm no..not a good opener
0-0 record..the first is your ass hole,the other your brain...get some notion
the cells in it are like paraplegics...they got problems with motion
LOL ok.....
come across with played out shit like MJ punches in RB's world
this chump thinks he knows it all just 'cause he dates a Librarian girl
No not really feelin....
the last book you layed your eyes on was "How to be wack"
lol you got all exicted and yelled "I'm so good...I can already do that!"
LOL.....thats funny....I liked that
go ahead rap about marjuana and alchol thinkin your words can brew
you wouldn't be dope if I made you bud-wiser...man you'd still get nothin but boos...
ok closer 2/5

You've been here for Months, While i just joined in May
So in this battle I'll give you all you can Hold, Like a chinese Buffet!
OK opener
I was Lookin For Competition, But this is already Done
The King's coming out on top, Like the NBA's Round One!
Cool nice....
Your Rhymes have Flaws, Your Skills Are Curvy
So I'll leave you Rushing to Smell Roses, Like the Kentucky Derby!
ummmm sortof ok
Seen your past Battles, And My Predictions Were Right
It's Obvious you need some, So Here's the Help Center of the Site!
lOL funny....I did that in one of my battles too
Crewless, Must be Trying to stay Quiet, Kids rhymes are a riot
So I'll Leave you counting numbers in loss columns
...Like people On the Atkins Diet!
Ok closiner... 4/5
vote/Scrip.....Can ya return the favor in my battles or something when ya get 100 post

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Kapitolins - your verse was pretty weak from the beginning

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Originally Posted by Kapitolins

Now this site's name is rapbattles not rapwimps, you're on...why's that?
Man you're still terrorized 'cause one of your arab friends said "Hi_Jack!"

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That was the weakest opener i have ever seen
You lacked punches, and you were consistantly weak
This was prolly your best bar

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Originally Posted by Kapitolins

0-0 record..the first is your ass hole,the other your brain...get some notion
the cells in it are like paraplegics...they got problems with motion

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Which was wack as fuck.. and seriously played
Elevate

Scripture came pretty decent
A few choppy lines here and there
but he came better overall

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Originally Posted by Scripture

Seen your past Battles, And My Predictions Were Right
It's Obvious you need some, So Here's the Help Center of the Site

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Choppy.. but a decent punch
You came pretty consistant as well with punches
but some lines were just fillers
anyways.. my vote goes to Scriptures
for actually having punches

V/Scriptures

Kapitolins-No punches, no personals, no creativity, not wit nothing. You were consistently weak with almost everything..and all these ineffective quotes was just a waste of your time and your opponents..I didnt understand half of them.."hey i can already do that" the hell? I truly dont understand. "How to be wack' NO NO NO..I wasnt feeling your verse at all...elevate..quick.

Scripture-Good verse. Good punches. Good flow. You did everything needed to win a battle. You were pretty consistent with decent punches. And I didnt think anything was choppy in your verse. Although I am tired of the Chinese Buffet punches..you came with some new, creative one's..good.

vote-Scripture

Oh yea, vote on Action vs Realm..................please.

Ok I'm upping this even though this guy got banned...Action if you don't get the word plays and all that you shouldn't vote on battles or ask me before you do....

even though he's banned im gonna vote...

Scripture- Good job, personals hit very good, i liked almost every line, the punches were very funny and very witty. Flow was good and so was the structure of the verse. You did a good job and even though your banned, keep doing your stuff..keep working

Kap- Weak verse man, It had no personals. The punches were wack. The flow was off throughtout the entire verse. Structure was off also. The verse itself was bad and you need to eleavte and use more personals...get better and use more wittyiness in your verses

v/scrpiture

Upping For Votes To Close This Battle...thank You

three up for votes on this battles drop a link.....

This battle was aight, but...

kapitolins: Ur verse was ehh. You came with personals, but they weren't hard hittin' and you didn't have any good punches. Wordplay was so so. Flow was pretty good and structure was pretty good. Keep elevatin'.

Scripture: U didn't do too well either. U had some okay punches. Help Center link is played. Wordplay was okay. Flow was okay. Structure was okay. Nothing really stood out to me. Keep elevatin'.

Vote: kapitolins

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