10 Lines
You spit first
No feeding
No biteing
No recycling
No crew votes
No hate votes
No d/r votes
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10 Lines
You spit first
No feeding
No biteing
No recycling
No crew votes
No hate votes
No d/r votes
DAMMIT!!!! I fuckin hate you!!!
If you end up winnin this fuckin fucked up battle like always,
I'm gonna kill you in cold blood motha fucka!
You a fuckin bitch, I saw you on that fuckin corner,
Tryin to learn from that fuckin first class hooker,
DAMMMIT!!!!! I'm fuckin hate you!!!
And that's the fuckin truth!
Words can't fuckin explain how much I want you fuckin dead!
I can picture you dead on a bed, with a bullet in your fuckin head,
You fuckin suck, your just a fuckin fuck up,
Bitch, suck these big nuts, your are fuckin gay,
awww fuckit.....I said what I wanted to say.
With your skill, i'm glad i'm not capable to be you
Because honestly, you fuckin suck.....
...........only way for you to win battles, is by dq
Ya record, multiply your win by 7, and you'll get it
Fuck man.. quit battling....
...you're wack, your rb career you should submit it
Notice i'm coming at you half assed, and killin you
Wait, this is below half assed....
........and still coming 20 times harder than you do
Shit, 6 lines down.. 4 left to rip a 2nd asshole, for him
Kid sent me PM's about an open mic....
..yeah you guessed it right, didn't read it.. I juss ignored him
What the fuck, man forget this battle, its obvoius who won
ILLunatic v.s FUBAR.....
....just reading that, its obvious whose gone be left sonned
Could you please vote in my battle(s) as I have took time to vote in yours..Thanks!!
^^Links In My Sig^^
Punches: ILLunatic took the punches eazy. Fubar you didn't try in this battle at all.
Wordplay: NONE maybe you should both add wordplay for a better verse.
Multies: FUBAR acually had multies and ILLunatic didn't.
Personal's: ILLunatic is the only 1 who had personal's and they were nice. the PM thing.
Flow: TIE they both sucked. ILLaunatic's was better though cos it acually rhymed.
ILLunatic took this battle eazy. FUBAR didn't even try.
Overall Vote:ILLUNATIC
Um ok.. did you not read the part where i said
Anyways.. upping #1Quote:
Originally Posted by Myself
Vote- Illunatic
Fubar- No words to describe how much u suck. Half of your lines were filled with "fuck" or "fucking". Most of your lines made no sense, and u had no personals or punches either. Most lines didnt even rhyme. You gotta elevate a lot man.
Ill- Obviously, you didnt even try. Ok personals, Ok punches. Good structure, and i know you didnt try, but your verse wasnt too good. Enough to easily beat Fubar.
Please return the favor:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=125735
u guys talking how are battle was weak. it was alot better then what u throw up here... i mean fubar, comon I know you can do better then that. that was just terrible...
wow... you talking about my battle being weak, illunatic... you are horrible.. on da real, no good punches... only line that was ok was... nothing, it seemed like u where talking, you had no flow what so ever.. I could read a book & find better flow. your set-up is well... sorry as shit. but u did manage to beat fubar, maybe u didn't try in this battle.. whitch I don't think u did. but anyways this battle was beon weak.. V---Illunatic he merked fubar.... fubar that verse was awful. sorry.......
Uppin#2
/v Illunatic easily.
FUBAR: You came with the most played shit i've seen in a long while, and most of your lines didn't even rhyme. Your punches hardly ever hit (when they existed), and all of your shit was played like I said. No Personals, bad structure, no punchess= wack ass verse.
Illunatic: Obviously didn't try, and didn't need to. Your punches were mostly pretty weak, but compared to Fubar, that was a legendary verse. You had lines that rhymed, personals, and punches.
v/ illunatic for a verse that didn't entirely suck.
4-0 Uppin#3
Find it weird why ILLunatic ALWAYS wants someone to spit first. LoL, what you scared or something? Anyway. Both of you came horrid. Terrible. The only reason ILLunatic won is because his made sense. Besides that, this is probably the worst battle...Ive seen. But Ill probably see more..anyway..do I have to break it down.
Fubar-You are wack. Work on punches, creativity, personals..everything..flow..and dont use so many cuss words..especially when you cant even use THOSE good enough..I think you have some emotional issue's that you need to work on..=/
ILLunatic-You know what you need to work on..you came half assed..work on your punches..and try not to be so obvious with your feeding "You spit first"..if anything you made the thread..have enough balls to spit first..
v-illunatic
both elevate..tremendously