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Blind Spit
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g/l homie..
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10-12 lines
Blind Spit
House Rules
g/l homie..
Check it......
''Intro" I know you new to this site so let me give you a few hints...........
I can tell becuz you saidYour a herb so let me make sure your reminded............Quote:
Originally Posted by 'Intro
And you rhymes is shitty you need to call Feeble Minded..........
Im taking it easy on you and if I lose you just being nipped.......
But CAN SOMEONE GET THE MAN SOME TAPE HE ABOUT TO GET RIPPED....
You think you cool becuz your name is 'intro' and and you a dumb fuck fool.....
Your sick in the head becuz im about to kill you and add you to the (MURDA -INK.) roster like if you was Ja rule.........
You a feeder and you need a new signature attached..............
But if you ever want to battle me against take his advice :nono: and set up a rematch.................
Holla
Ya see that button that says 'Reply'? Think twice before ya click it..
Even RB's God can tell ya, you'll simply get out witted..
Lyricaly ILL? So un-original you can find the name on every rap board..
But I guess yours is unique, cant even spell 'Lyrically' right whore..
In your sig you portray that you're a dope emcee..
.........but honestly kid ya..
Couldnt 'rap on a joint' if the topic was a knee..
When you become awesome..I'll give ya the proper reply..Quote:
Originally Posted by Lyricaly ILL
Dont even THINK to drop a record..it'd be a major spill..
And when they asked why you blow..you'd say you were Lyricaly ILL..
Peace..
yo you copied me with the quote thing lol.......uppin=1
Lyrical-You had some good lines......Also your structure was good....allso It was a lil complexy but I was fillin some of ya rhymes aight....Very understandable....Try working on not to use the smilie faces aight
intro- you had some good lines also but lyricaly was a lil better...you had some good structure and you had some understable lines too.Work on some lines...though....Very good on understading...A lil problem with the reading though...
v/ lyricaly becuz better punch lines
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return the favor in anyone of my battles aight...holla at cha boi
id say intro by a hair, cuz his structure kept better flow
as for L ILL had his struc fucked up which effected wordplay
and i thought intro had slightly better punches which connected
and also slightly better personals that hit pretty decent in a sense
i mean L ILL some of his bars were long and had capslock on
which is what herbs do and overall it fucked up the presentation
vote/intro for coming harder with disses that were original in a sense
both can elavate but id say this was a pretty close battle non the less
yo hit my battles in return, cuz i took the time too vote and u should to
remember to vote on my battles, dont forget i'll remember if u dont
Vote-ILL
He had some nice punchlines, structure was more on. Everything was good, all around. I wasnt feeling all the punches, like the feeble minded line, but eh it was good enough to win against the other kid. ILL had better flow too, the other kids stuff was choppy throughout the whole first half. so by comparison, i think ill won.
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