State Of Existence

My lifestyle's like the nile, got an awkward flow
The way my feet take me places I shouldn't ought to go
Im walkin' slow ..
In the opposite direction than I'm thinkin' in
A routine talk w/ God everynite
But it's not my words when I speak with him
It's not my actions, swirlin' thoughts imagined
Re-drop the same thoughts, but the walk is acted
The plots are practiced, everyday the same thing
Wake up, get dressed, then look out onto the world gazing
Raising hell, cuz when I wanna go right I go left
It's my life! But if I don't do everything right
Your not impressed ..
I'm dressed to make moves, destructive scenes
Honestly faithful, it's painful ..
Someone tuggin' these puppet strings
I'm stuck between, a real world on a painted canvas
Always questioning my dreams, getting tainted answers
Imma sacred dancer, I just gotta tie my shoes tight
I lose sight, cuz every morning I wake up to a new life
A confused mind, it's impossible to think before I act
Yesterday I had the star role, now Im heatin' on the back
Sinkin' on this path, just to acquaint w/ a new one 2morrow
Tired of bein' a ventriloquist's dummy ..
Find a new soul to borrow!
A new soul to make hollow, mold and compile to your liking
A new soul to characterize and fit your style of writing!
Quit fighting to make them shoes fit me, they're too small
Instead why don't you attire me with toy parachute ..
In case I do fall?
But you choose, call it how you want, Im unable to refuse
It's up to you which games I win, and which games I lose
My strings, almost completely chewed, ready to break
Why'd we have to have a pool today, instead of a lake?
At the end of the day I lie awake ..
Awaitin' tomorrow mornin' when you call out
Dreamin' about existence when I've never existed ..
Reality, Im just a toy in Jesus' doll house.

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The shits crazy nice, i love the ending but you really do need to read this twice to get a grasp at some of the things you hint at, but thats part of what makes this peice so nice. the last line really throws the whole thing together, the words were chosen carfully i like that, the begingin is a little off the topic but it works, keep postin fire and knoweldge

Thanks for the reply fam .. Uppin for more?

Edit: And can a mod delete that reply below me? LoL

hey dog nice tight as hell keep it up

Upping ..

The shits crazy nice, i love the ending but you really do need to read this twice to get a grasp at some of the things you hint at, but thats part of what makes this peice so nice. the last line really throws the whole thing together, the words were chosen carfully i like that, the begingin is a little off the topic but it works, keep postin fire and knoweldge


i agree