10-14 lines
ill hit up first.
you drop 45 minutes after.
no crew votes...
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10-14 lines
ill hit up first.
you drop 45 minutes after.
no crew votes...
i aint droppin in 45 minutes...
checked in
45 after i drop... do u need more time than that................?
this dude'z sig says.." i dont make sigs".....thats a personal that has to be played*
put it to ease, and put 'em in my class for newbs , to be made* ( mtv )
failure to RB... give this herb his bitch slap. aka ..eviction notice*
yor' verse wusnt good enough for a hate vote, so hator's vote-us*
you prolly cudnt get thru a verse if you dont cuss, justa hit sum punches*
250 posts and yor' a light weight, better keep up them crunches*
and double pack them lunches, then come back and re-match me*
this battle aint stressin, more like just to relax-me*
i cast my line and gotta bite.. i caught this fish*
ill go back for a second dish- accept my thread agen and ill slap this bitch*
Im droppin today...
You seriouse? MDR? Your worste than MC Hammer's fade...
I mean look at the Herb..dawg take off that Lamp Shade!
The sigs good tho....it's coo how you stay so true...
I mean....that head in blue...yeh it looks just like you..
Take that aerosal Em....an paint your self some ribs....
Pathetic wannabee....your existance proves vanilla had kids
Why you even attempt.....bitch should stick to strictly graffin
Cus ya rap's aint happnin..all you doin is keep'en em laughin...
-closer-
An' ill laugh along....when u Tag' n get Tag'd by the Fed's.....
Face it....your words are as Gay as that white patch on your leg
oakley takes this... better verse all round,,, he needs to brush up on punches alot... this was weak battle and hardly any hard punches were thrown,...
...all that said oakleys verse was definatly better than mdr's pathetic attempt...
no quotables otherwise i would drop some..... oakley had better structure, no stars or shit or highlighted attempts at wordplay, and came more vicious.... so
Vote Oakley
Ok.
MDR, most of your verse didnt rhyme properly.
You had some multi's in there..
.. But most just didnt have any effect at all.
Dish - Fish - Bitch..
.. That bar ^ doesnt mean much, does it.
Not a good verse, you had little if any punches, let alone personals.
Oakley.
Your verse made me laugh, quite alot.
The lamp shade pun had me rolling.
You really took to his sig.
Only thing you can do against a unknown, really.
You had nice punches, that just humilliated your opponent.
v/ Oakley.
Hit the link in my sig, please.
Thank you.
Peace.
MDR
this dude'z sig says.." i dont make sigs".....thats a personal that has to be played*
put it to ease, and put 'em in my class for newbs , to be made* ( mtv )
wack, didnt hit, 3/10
failure to RB... give this herb his bitch slap. aka ..eviction notice*
yor' verse wusnt good enough for a hate vote, so hator's vote-us*
attempt at wordplay, just didnt worl, 4/10
you prolly cudnt get thru a verse if you dont cuss, justa hit sum punches*
250 posts and yor' a light weight, better keep up them crunches*
lol, wack, 3/10
and double pack them lunches, then come back and re-match me*
this battle aint stressin, more like just to relax-me*
prolly ur best bar, 5/10
i cast my line and gotta bite.. i caught this fish*
ill go back for a second dish- accept my thread agen and ill slap this bitch*
wack, 3/10
pretty wack verse, nothing really that hit hard, an why the fuck you got *'s at the end of all your lines, use a comma or sum shit.
overall 18/50
oakley
You seriouse? MDR? Your worste than MC Hammer's fade...
I mean look at the Herb..dawg take off that Lamp Shade!
not too bad, 4/10
The sigs good tho....it's coo how you stay so true...
I mean....that head in blue...yeh it looks just like you..
lol, not the best, not the worst, 5/10
Take that aerosal Em....an paint your self some ribs....
Pathetic wannabee....your existance proves vanilla had kids
ok, 4/10
Why you even attempt.....bitch should stick to strictly graffin
Cus ya rap's aint happnin..all you doin is keep'en em laughin...
not the best again, 4/10
-closer-
An' ill laugh along....when u Tag' n get Tag'd by the Fed's.....
Face it....your words are as Gay as that white patch on your leg
lol, niceish 6/10
a below par verse from you, which got you the win.
overall23/50
uppin
Yo just to say MDR your lines was pretty good but not as good as oakley.Like the other people I say the same thing as they said.Oakley had some good lines and I could understand them.MDR I could barley understand them and like I said b4 your lines was pretty good but oakley was a little better.So my choice is
v/oakley
But b4 I vote you going to have to make a honest vote in this battle
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...42#post1343342
and this
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=124709
Holla
^ Vote polled
uppin
eh...it waz a weak battle...but Oakley takes this battle easy...
mdr had mostly fillers..no decent punches...no creativity....u came 2 basic...like nursery rhymes...u need 2 elevate...use bigger vocab..and add creativity 2 ur punches...
oakley- eh..u came weak...but u killed em easy...ur punches ha creativity..some of them...but u got this mainly 4 punches...and ya structure was good 2...
punches- oakley- had creativity..
flow- oak- easy 2 read...had a nice rhythm
struc- oak- easily visible
creativity-oak..he put effort in2 punches...thought about them...
vote- oakley...easily..