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10-14 lines
no cheating bullshit
all votes must be explained
Im teachin this student and leavin his ass dunce'd
And his name is The 2nd,cause I already Killed Him Once
Spit poisonus words they infect when it swarms around his head
Zee is always Coming in Last, he even loses to the Whole Alphabet
And to be truthful you suck, that's right nigga I said it!!
Cause Zee cant eat me, like he's a fuckin diabetic*
If you're needing advice, here's some, just retire kid
Cause I'll beat yo ass, worse than SideWinder Did
You'll get punched in the face, just for trying to do me
Cause I'll send you to Hell Boy <==== and Im not talkin about movies
*diabetics cant eat alot of candy, and of course, Reese is a name of a candy
Killed who once? I know nigga u aint talking abt me.
Fuck Mr.Reese Unsoved
You tryin to assinate my character, but we all know I was banned
They got scared, cuz I’m a new breed and nigggaz here dun like transformations
They the ones that kare abt rhymes schemes, structure they don’t know abt my flow
You talking abt experience, we all saw the videos
Where u and u dumb buddies pulling tricks like u was on jackass
My shyt will make you smile u know zee the 2nd is da alpha prime
Ms. Reese your murder went unsolved
I can even beat you with these weak ryhmes
And niggga please who would want to eat you
You nasty and crusty, nothing like a reeses pieces
Man we all I know you as white as snow
Take this message son you fuckin shooked one
uppin this shit for some votes
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Zee - Your verse was crap, hardly anything rhymed in there,,,flow was weak,,,structure was crap,,,no personals,,,no punches,,,no multies...weak verse all together.
Mr Reese - Your verse was ok...you had ok punch lines... Good personals like that alphabet 1... flow was good and so was structure.
vote mr reese unsoved - better everything
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Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Axiom
^^^what more did he need to say, thats bullshit axiom..
I would have to say Mr Reese got this with a better verse with better punches and everything else
I dont have enough posts to vote yet, so Im just voicing my opinion..
Mr. Reese you had a pretty good verse. Good vocab. You had some solid structure and flow. Good punches and some decent personals. You had much better concepts than those of your opponent. Your creativity shined aswell.. overall a good verse... i think this was the star line . . .
You'll get punched in the face, just for trying to do me
Cause I'll send you to Hell Boy <==== and Im not talkin about movies
Pretty good line but could use a bit of work. THis next line i wasn't really feelin'
And to be truthful you suck, that's right nigga I said it!!
Cause Zee cant eat me, like he's a fuckin diabetic*
iono man its kinda creative but it aint like diabteics can't eat...
Zee the 2nd your structure wasn't really on. You didn't flow too well. You hardly rhymed come the ending... you know... maybe you should write that you gottha rhyme in the rules list.. lol... guess some ppl just dun know. Truthfully I wasn't really feeling a line in your verse. Read some books. work on vocab... and listen 2 more rap. Elevate young1
Vote Mr. Reese
I'm polling jus to return da favor......Mr. Reese I wasn't really feelin da verse but it was good but dat alphabet part i've heard and is old...Mr. Reese came with some pretty hard hitting punches and some pretty played and unplayed concepts....Mr. Reese didn't even have to break a sweat to beat Zee the 2nd...and dat Sidewinder line it was took da battle almost automatically...Zee the 2nd wasn't rhyming at all and some times he was....Zee's verse was very unbearable to read...his lines made no sense at all and weren't close to hard hitting...none of Zee's lines were even comparable to da killer lines of Mr. Reese...Zee had a verse dat kept nothing but non-RHYMIN filler and it was dissapointing...Zee you cool and all but your verse dis time obviously wasn't good..both keep elevating your skillz.
vote=Zee