Trogdor Vs. Tactixx

10-15 lines....
30-45 min...
blind spit...
regular rules....
check in when you start........

OK well this is my check in....
still waitin on you Trogdor...but Ima start mine now....

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u wouldnt be with me on all levels if u installed inter-coms
and no1 stops to watch your battles.....not even peepin toms
i'll have this emcee hiding, he shoulda called himself native tactixx
stretch u out like ya warning sign worse than giraff necks n' elastics
now watch me blow Tac out like anorexic sluts who vommit a meal
your best defense is no seatbelt so you can use a wind-shield
I'll decapatate ur head, this preyin mantis is ready to mate
Tac wouldnt be outa controll as African country fertility rates
4get spittin dirty, u couldnt come clean nailed to a fuckin cross
ya lines are rotten, ur just a bad apple like a crashed macintosh

Ayo,

Trogdor could lose his left side and still never be right,
I can end your weak exsitstence quicker than gas ignites,
I'm persistant,and always strapped with knives and pipes,
If its urgent I can make certain you get my point bluntly,
Even your best vocab and wordplay still couldn't stump me,
Your verse might be better kid if someone good edits it,
win chances just vanished with that basic rap etiquette,
Youre gonna need lyrical ammo, skills and a good thesaurus,
I just wrote the song "Wack" and your verse is the chorus,
Trogder's raps are gettin worse, mine keep getting better,
Bitch couldn't flip scripts if he was a hollywood director,
It's cool you got a web page at your age Ive seen it rarely,
but explain why you have links to Pictures of fairy faeries *


Mleh....thats it...

Good job.....lets see if we can get some votes now....
Peace.....

I dont have a webpage bro
lol what the fuck

anyways can u hit up my battle with Kracka honestly while we wait

thanks

upin

Trogdor- Good verse, It started out nice very nice i thought. Some okay punches you had. Your flow was aight not the best tho. Structure good as hell. i vote you because your verse was better then his, and maybe a little more better punches then his.

Tactixx- Good verse, but i liked his better. Aight punches but he had a little advantage on that. Good structure you keep it inline and not like all over da place. But i pick him cuz he had a better verse and better punches but it was a close battle tho...

vote- Trogdor

tactixx- ur verse was aight. u had some good punches. flow was aight and da structure was striaght.

trogdor- ur verse was aight to. u had punches and perosnels. da flow and structure was better than his.

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Trogdor

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nice battle. you both came good.

trogdor- came pretty nice and original. tha peepin tom line is prolly my fav. in this battle. made me laugh. thats always good. your flow was near perfect, as well as your structure. no real personals, your only downfall. other than that, you came good.

tacktixx- you came good too. nice flow and structure. punches were jus as good i think. you came with more, coulda fixed sum stuff up tho. honestly, ima have to say you took this tho, you came wit much more personals.

vote-Tactixx...more direct wit personals, close on tho, props to both.

peace

I Have to go wit Trogdor on this battle his punches hit better and i was feeling the


meta4s and personals and tact i know u can do better don't come this soft any more

and get ur structure right and throw more personals in there

My vote tro

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Have to go wit Trogdor on this battle his punches hit better and i was feeling the meta4s and personals they was ok and um work on ur structure the flow came out right needs a little work and u could have more personals than what u have

Tact I felt you could of cam harder than that because i have seen better my best advise to you is come hard everytime u battle you know and throe more personals and wordplay work on that and ur structure get that right u should be ok

My vote go to Tro

return favor in the name of jesus

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