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Originally Posted by HYPER-ACTYVE
aight man, ill battle u but lets make this battle alittle quicker, straight?
rules:
10 lines
no feedin
no biting
no hate votes
no crew votes
and no d/r
blind spit- we both spit at the same time or by a due date
each mc's verse is due 2 hours after there checkin
u got it mayne, aight lets go
GL
Check itQuote:
Originally Posted by HYPER-ACTYVE
Check it
Your tryn' to show me up kid
ill take you out like yo mama did
u no ur less then you think
bustn caps will take people out in a blink
you didnt no im aiming for you
your rap is crap and it does more than you do
bring it show, show me up,do it your way
im not even trying thats what i gotta say
i hope we can still be friends,good buddys, so goodluck
the last thing i gotta say is i hope you fuckup.
checkin........................................... .
checkin. what?sorry i dont understand.Quote:
Originally Posted by HYPER-ACTYVE
DAMN! wut do i say to this kat who dont know shit?
he dont know wut an alias or a checkin is,............
...................and for god sakes he thinks hes sick!
who on earth gave u the right to register?
.....there sight HAD to be blinded or blurred
cause wut im seeing now is not RB criteria
its infesting SHIT, something we call bacteria
how on earth do u live kid....how do keep on livin?
wut happen.....u get beat till ya pussy ass gave-in
i gotta say.......theres no 'Sorry' for bein stupid
this had to be ma wackest & still left ya toothless
man i aint know wut yo spit to this kat, hes stupid, thats wut ma whole verse is on
shit, but wutever, i aint come hard at all
aight then lets get some votes
hyper nice verse yo
Vote: Hyper
he had beter everything, personals a bit. His verse wasnt all good, but the ohter kids made him look retarded lol. HTe other dudes verse had nothing at all, and I mean nothing.
At least hyper had sum metas.......and way better vocab. the vocab was a huge difference in these two emcees.
Please hit this up the both of you.....thanks make it fair
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=122309
Im starting to think this kid Brendon is retarted fa real like u said lol
I mean Hypers verse was nothin and THIS WAS STILL A MERKING! LOL
this isnt worth judging but anyway......
Punches: obviosly Hyper since Brendon had none
Metas: A little by Hyper, and Brendon had none lol
Vocab: Hyper, and Brendon rhymed like he jus learned english
Multies: none really for either
Wordplay:Both weak, but its obvious Hyper wasnt even trying LOL he dindnt have to
Over all: HYPER ....duh
if this is the future of Rb im scared lol
lol................shit mayne, u got people thinkin u retarded now, shit! Thats some funny shit vanja, but i aint need to come hard at all. At first i kinda though he was an alias, but when he said he didnt know wut that meant, and i red his verse, i knew for sure he wasnt. DAMN son, thats pretty bad people think u just started to speak english. Well hell, lets get some more votes, even though this shit was weak both ways, i know i was weak in this but there wasnt no reason to come hard, the kids a fuckin retard, well uppin(1).................LoL
Hyper Actyve- Your verse was okay. Ya had some good punches ya dig, i mean so much betterr then his ya dig. Your metas were good and so was your vocab so good job, keep up tha good work.
Brandon- WOW, damn you gotta be retarded, cuz you was like what does check mean, do you ugh speak any english? damn, anyways Your verse was not all dat god but a tiny bit okay for a newb. No good punches at all. I wasn't feelin a flow and ya did ok on a structure. So you need to elevate a lottttt.....
vote Hyper Actyve
This was a pretty weak battle over all
Hyper:you jsut came harder though still not that hard. your verse was way more complex than his and though your flow was kinda messed it still flowed. Try to rhyme your stuff beter in future attemps and put more into multis.
Brandon watson:Your need to elevate majorly, your verse had no good punches, you talked about your self
. also you said you hoped hed fuck up(you cant beat him unles he fucks up??)think your stuff through before hand ok. Work on your flow and vocab.
Atleast most of your stuf rhymed.
V/ Hyper
yeah i know wut u mean about tryin to flow better, but in all honesty, i really didnt know wut to say to this kat, i was sure everyone knew he was no good, so...............but thats no excuse, i just didnt come hard at all, there was no attempt, and maybe i should've came harder even though i knew he was no good.
but its straight i got ya, uppin(2)........
uppin(3).......................................... ..
Wow Weak Ass Battle
Brandon-after Seein That Verse U Actually Scared Me ..not Because Ur Dope,but Because It Sounded Like A 3rd Graders Verse...no Offense
But U Need To Work N Every Thing Ur Structure Was Ok....but Everything Else Like Flow,punches,creativity,personels U Need To Work On...imean That Verse Was Garbage......if U Need Help Go To Emergency Center Where U Can Get Tuitoring For Ur Verse,please Take My Advice
Hyper -ur Verse Was Ok,nothing Special Thow
Ur Structure Was Allright,flow Was Ok,punches Were Ok....
The Only Thing U Really Need To Do Better Is Have A Lil More Creativity And Personels,although Personels Werent That Bad....
V/hyper-active