10-14 lines
no d/r
no crew
no hate
no feedin
no bullshit
since i set it up...you spit first
and you got 30 minutes to spit
good luck
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10-14 lines
no d/r
no crew
no hate
no feedin
no bullshit
since i set it up...you spit first
and you got 30 minutes to spit
good luck
i merk this dude, callin out members of my crew
have u killing ur family like contestants on family fued
u lack skills, hell i could even say ur skill-less
play this like poker, showing up would be ur best-bet
ur rhymes are dry the sahara, and ur outcome looks dim
ur rhymes wouldn't be elivated if they were on 24 inch rims
catalist, nigga please, with a name like that this'll be a breeze
ur verse couldn't get a-rise from me if it were full of yeast
ur the wackest newb on this entire site, dont front
when go was handin out talent, u were out for lunch
u cant spit for shit, dont even know why u try
if u had the french jude, u wouldn't win with a bribe
u lack in every verse, have u carried out in a herse
ur compared to handguns... not with power, but in short bursts
checking in......will spit in a few
Sdizzle should be dead last, he tried to step and he bled fast
You dont Belong in a crew.....More like a Special Ed-Class!
Does anybody wanna see you? No one comes to your concerts dude
Plus your style is so washed up........
........................ that Dove sponsors you!
He's not into winning, don't need to fall and he'll lose
Cuz your only chance in Cryptic lyrics.......
........................is being the waterboy of the crew!
Half of it's done with lovin this war, you're wack and buggin of course
Sdizzle isn't relatively ill.......
............................. it's a distant cousin of yours!
Nothing to live for......merking in progress...aint that a fact
I couldnt figure out your sig...........
.............................but i figured out that your wack!
Quit this game! Leave the game quickly...no need to stop and frown
Cuz you should have learned your lesson........
............................when the creation turned you down!
Hopefully this will teach you, that you'll never come big
Cuz you should have listened to Jobus when he said...
Cleared of freeposts.Quote:
Originally Posted by jobus
-Axe
uupin
sdizzle...had a good verse, it had punches and personals thast hit hard.
It also had a good flow and the structure was nice. I wanted to see less filler and more personals. It was an overall good verse but it was lacking the power to hit catalist hard. good job
catalist...what can i say...it was a great verse. it didnt have much filler and the punches and personals hit dizzle very hard. I liked the closer alot. the flow was on point and the structure was also good. i like that style. good verse keep it up
v/catalist
sdizzle/ Well h had som e really good punches and flow was on key, i enjoyed reading it, some parts had me laffin, overall 7/10 Good drop
catalist/ good flow, like the different style, n technique was good. Punches were good in some area's some could of been better. But i enjoyed readin urs more, it had more meaning in it, and you had the ability to take some-ones quote n use it was really good. thats what won u my vote 8/10
Overall vote: catalist
thanks ...uppin 1
i always return the favor.
do drop an honest vote as well as a link.
sdizzle - decent punches, some were played. A little creativity. Alot of your lines were just fillers, nothing really great about your verse. you came across sorta... rushed. You shoulda taken your time, and put thought and effort into this.
Catalist - structure coulda been more solid, punches were nice, only a few were played. a few personals, not many. Verse was pretty complex, had a few witty comments in there.. overall i say you won
V/Catalist
Sdizzle- You had okay punches, but some were dumb. There was really no flow at all i thought. And it seems like you didnt take your time on your verse like it was a quick one. But it was a good one i liked the "24 inch rim line", But could improve maybe.
Catalist- I liked the structure. Your punches were nice and dope. Your verse was nice and it sounded like it had a flow. But the closer sounded dope. But anyways you got skill man. So keep up tha good work.
vote- Catalist (return tha favor on mine)
uppin 2
and to and1...drop a link and ill peep it......
to the rest ...drop links
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=121923
there it is .....hit it up then....~peace~
uppin3
close this...i hit his up with a vote^
so drop an honest vote along with a link
ite .....catalist easily took this battle....
even though Sdizzles in mah crew, i say that catalist took this one- no hate 2 sdizzle...
catalist- i luved ya line..
He's not into winning, don't need to fall and he'll lose
Cuz your only chance in Cryptic lyrics.......
........................is being the waterboy of the crew!
that one had me laughin....nice creativity......i have seen other of ur battles and u have surely elevated!....good shyt
Sdizzle- ahh....u lost this one dawg, ya flow waz good, but ya punches laked...
u need to add more creavity and expression in2 ya shit....urz waz borin...no effort int2 ya punches...u shuld never underestimate ya opponent....nice verse tho
for a better overall verse including punches- catalist gets my HONEST vote...
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...ricallyabbusiv
plze hit dat up...only one more vote needed...:)
Because Catalist was banned for being a biter, all of his wins are being reversed. As the admins told me I could do this, it is being done on EVERY battle of his.