(((FresH))) vs. Godfather(2)

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You know the rules...

Verse due today 45 mins after check in..

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Here I am... I dunno why I’m battling the Godfather of wack,
It’s a mystery as to why this kid would actually bother to rap,
I’ll emberass you in front of ya friends... Your empires through,
This verse beats you no doubt.. And scares off your entire crew,
Parents never even met each other.. He’s a bastard to start,
I’ll easily have this kid ‘beat’ like I ‘mastered the art’,
This kid gets ‘cocky’ votes... Truthful votes are only his mental illusions,
Dickridin ‘The End’ is the only way this kid can jump to conclusions,
After this fucking kid battles it’s the time that his viagra calls,
Thats the only time he’ll be ‘bustin flows’.. Like niagra falls,

Uppin for godfathers verse........................

I am going to drop in a few ok

Iight as long as it in by some time today.........

I smite lames, Tryin to fight G? Next time get the right name
Cuz u dont got the wheel power to keep up like abadoned bike frames
I type pain, I'll have you shook in fear, Claim you took me here?
But I'm droppin Fresh more times than Mike Jordan in his rookie year
Have you look in tears, My throttles kill, Everything you drop is ill?
But its kinda like your sexual oreintation...queerer than a 2 dollar bill
Im the hottest still, Broken your cells, I'll have'em hopin for jail
Cuz might as well edit my verse in the post above me to quote a Big L
Boastin your spells? But cant match me, ya punches cant catch me
Cuz if your "grammers not in your grade" is the only time your speech class- E
*Lemme Strap 3*
Im speakin carnage, You aint gon reap the hardest
Cuz you could "tag-up" my name and still couldnt match me, Graffiti Artist

G/L uppin for votes

* don't think bit i have more than one name

Upping #1.........................................

I dunno that battle was one sided IMO. Fresh had a good verse. Couple good punches and personals and generally an alright verse. Godfather I don't know where 2 start. . . your structure was the only thing holding you together. I dunno you seem 2 have some deeper issues that many of us have no idea what ur talkin about when u rap about them.. but man i dont think i felt a line in your whole verse... sorry man but you gottah work on your vocab. and give your content a good recalibrating.

i dont get newbies? i really don't. ^
i saw godfather taking this from the beginning.
the other kid had a few ok decent lines, but no punches??
i can't see a single punch in his entire verse.
godfather just came out and ripped him up.
the multies made the verse even better than it woulda been without...
good usage of the multies, not forcing them - they made sense.
i liked the jordan punch.. the wheel power was a little witty..
this could have been partially recycled... but u cant assume...
this was god by far

vote- godfather 2

uppin for votes and sab you one dickrider when i have time to rip u i will

Fresh didn't really have that many punchlines,
and the ones that he did have, were pretty weak.
Structure was goin good.. but he fucked it up
No multies nor word play.. pretty weak verse..
Overall.. i'd rate this about....9/20

GodFather came pretty good this time, actually
He got this in my eyes. He had good flow,
some multies which you dont really see.
And his punches were just hard hitting.
This is what needs to be seen by Godfather more.
Overall.. i'd rate this a 12/20

V/Godfather

Well i liked the structure of fresh's verse...but the punches were kinda generic and not aimed well...the opener was maybe your only punch, and pretty weak....it flowed nice though, maybe try uppin the vocab and try for harder punches...keep at it..
Godfather-lots of multi's...but not too many, it still flowed nice and you had a couple of creative lines...i like the bike frame one...structure was good, nice verse....maybe a little more personals is all I can think of....good job..

V-Godfather(2)
return the favor...check my sig..thx...

uppin for votes

This battle was okay, but...

(((Fresh))): Ur verse was weak. Hardly any real punches. And you had maybe one good line in ur verse. The one with beat and mastered the art. Too bad you haven't.... LOL... anyway man, ur whole rap scheme needs work. Keep elevatin'.

Godfather(2): First off, poll vote on my battle with CAMROK, aight? It's in my sig. Ur verse was pretty good. Nice punches, but you just need to get up another level on all your aspects. But it was good. Keep elevatin'.

Vote: Godfather(2)

*Vote on my battles and I'll return the favor later.*