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10 - 16 lines
blind spit
no feeding in a blind spit
posts r do in a hour
good luck
Checkin' in... Good luck
Pleaze......Quote:
Originally Posted by Big Tissle
"Dear god please forgive cuz i have sin"
lol
lets go.....
God i guess u betta off to challenge a this newbee
u saw how illunatic did me so u think u can school me
please......i wont stop starvin for that first victory
until u in a hospital bed claimin ya ass is sick of me
please tell me whats the real reason to go against me
like Canibus vs LL i would say you aimin for history
for now on i will decease u and exterminate ya
your rhymes stink, the mic has to wear an a respiratah
i found god that was the issue i told the revrin
you disrespectin god's name, is u sure that your ass in heaven
you answer every prayer but i bet u wont answer this one
"dear god i pray that i get my first rap win in this one"
and dont be shy and hesitate when u speak to me
you afraid to get shook up, thats why u got people to preach to me
nah u cant be god hmm or maybe he might be
or he might be someone influenced by bruce al-migh-tey
in dear god please forgive i have sin....add me after forgive..oh yeah in the first line of my verse...delete that letter a after the word challenge and before this i forgot to take it out...
Aight, check it...
This nigga is truly a Classic, trying to fuck with a MC way above him
I know u tryin' to reach me, but I'm truly elevated, I smite at a whim
I'm here to destroy this hoe, and I will, cause you done made me mad
Battlin' mods and gettin' ur ass beat, but u still wanna get served, it's sad
I drop my lyrics like whoa, now I find myself forced to destroy this hoe
Nigga, you have no flow, u about to get served, but I'll wrap u in a bow
Style Change
I can understand ur choice by wantin' to battle with me, you see
Many MC's on RapBattles doubt at first glance that I will be legendary
You got on Bitchslapped lookin' for a battle, wanted a win on ur record
But u battlin' God now, I gotta show my mystical ability to wreck herbs
I examine all my opponents and I can see clearly u have no battlin' heart
In this race, I've been finished for hours while ur still tryin' to get at start
Pass over the mic, cause ur rap days here are done when I count 3..2..1
But I actually can see you bein' a MC, cause ur already RB's Biggest Pun.
Later
*Record and wreck herbs rhyme, just say it differently*
aight job well done....lol..lets up get votes uppin#1
punches/God you had sum ok punches; didn't saw any gud ones from Classic and if I did they were played
personals/God you should do betta, you had personals at least cuz again i din't saw any from Classic
structure/They both had a gud structure I suppose
multis/God had more multis than Classic so.........
flow/God had a betta flow cuz he had a betta wordplay. and way betta voc. and it just made more sense than Classic; overall vote: GOD
Return the favour man, check my battles in my signature, thx............
overall it was a good battle
thought god came harder then classic
breakdown"
opener:god
multies:no one
enjoy reading:god
punchlines:god
flow:god
structure:god
god: god thought u came harder then classic
you had better punchlines...and better flow....
classic:though ur verse was weak u got merked
need to elevate .....................................
.......................
....no hate just a vote
v/ god
please return the favor in this battle and ill drop my poll vote
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...69#post1278069
um classci not to arlarm you but you have 5 battles in the first page of frontlines
thats bad , for next time your only alowed 3
short and simple///
classic- flow wus off, but u had an alright verse...........2/5
god- better personals, nice character ..........4/5
vote: god
Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - ILLunatic
Uppin #1... jockyourself, thanks for the vote, but please poll vote, and please vote again with mre explanation.... 1 line voting gets the vote DQed.
Classic
Work on wording your lines properly. Keep elevating.Quote:
God i guess u betta off to challenge a this newbee
u saw how illunatic did me so u think u can school me
"a this newbee"- Make sure to fix those mistakes before posting. Filler line.
please......i wont stop starvin for that first victory
until u in a hospital bed claimin ya ass is sick of me
Sick lines are really played. Sorry.
please tell me whats the real reason to go against me
like Canibus vs LL i would say you aimin for history
Ehh... not great. Especially seeing as you're unknown.
for now on i will decease u and exterminate ya
your rhymes stink, the mic has to wear an a respiratah
no.
i found god that was the issue i told the revrin
you disrespectin god's name, is u sure that your ass in heaven
Comma's would help, cause this is really hard to read/understand.
you answer every prayer but i bet u wont answer this one
"dear god i pray that i get my first rap win in this one"
weak.
and dont be shy and hesitate when u speak to me
you afraid to get shook up, thats why u got people to preach to me
Needs rewording
nah u cant be god hmm or maybe he might be
or he might be someone influenced by bruce al-migh-tey
Lol, okay then. Weak finisher.
Quote:
This nigga is truly a Classic, trying to fuck with a MC way above him
I know u tryin' to reach me, but I'm truly elevated, I smite at a whim
You can't use the word nigga and then say "I smite at a whim" in the same bar. It's just not right.
I'm here to destroy this hoe, and I will, cause you done made me mad
Battlin' mods and gettin' ur ass beat, but u still wanna get served, it's sad
Decent personal.
I drop my lyrics like whoa, now I find myself forced to destroy this hoe
Nigga, you have no flow, u about to get served, but I'll wrap u in a bow
You've used the phrase "get served" twice now. You'll wrap him in a bow? Sounds kinda gay.
Style Change
I can understand ur choice by wantin' to battle with me, you see
Many MC's on RapBattles doubt at first glance that I will be legendary
Am I mistaken or did you diss yourself?
You got on Bitchslapped lookin' for a battle, wanted a win on ur record
But u battlin' God now, I gotta show my mystical ability to wreck herbs
That's alright.
I examine all my opponents and I can see clearly u have no battlin' heart
In this race, I've been finished for hours while ur still tryin' to get at start
Ehhh...
Pass over the mic, cause ur rap days here are done when I count 3..2..1
But I actually can see you bein' a MC, cause ur already RB's Biggest Pun.
Best line in the battle. That was much better.
Vote- God... because it's sunday and he came harder
Now vote on this
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...=120190&page=1
Uppin #2
easy one to decide...
God's elevated.. classic is new.. quite simple, and you can easily see this..
Classic u had some ok ideas and thought.. you need to reword things better and definitely up thevocab alot more.. then put ur ideas together real nicely.. short n sweet makes for hard punches.. u didn't come very hard in this.. ur flow was ok and everything else just incorporate more into a verse....
God.. not ur best that i've seen you post.. but easily enough to take this battle.. u had better and nicer connecting punches, many personals were involved here.. I like the wording of ur punches... all in all it was alright
vote- god