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i thought it was pretty dope ...liked the rhyme secence.....the rhymthen...i was really feeling ......it ............i give it ..........8/10

Spoken Word amazing they way u express yourself.

I liked this poem and the rhymesheme but as a poet it doesnt have to rhyme everytime some of the rhyme sheme kinda looked forced but the rest it was fluent

Resp.

This was a pretty dope piece...kinda reminded me of a lincoln park song....your structure was good....I like how you put all the feeling into it....

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=120182
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criticism

^Yes.a linkin Park song is right...This was a Fanfic I did for another site..
The contest was to take a favorite LP song and translate it to your own version...
I didn't win though :(

i liked it...can almost hear it being sung in the backgrounds of my mind...well done
peep deep

lmao @ those thinking he wrote this. its word for word from Linkin Park.

where is the translation?....