Azure Vs locknes

Ok.
He dropped his verse in the callout thread. Here.

Here is his verse.

you bitches are qick to back down/
cause yall don't know what hip-hop mean it's so much more than R-a-p/
i run with r-p-gs sweep the streets smack fools who spit weak/
u better take a seat/
cause if u don't /
you be creaped and i'll take your life with my heat/
u know what i mean/
tell every one locknes the lyrical fiend/
u couldn't out rap even if my shit sounded crapy/
i'll have your mama sayin "eye papi"/
o.k now dont copy you and your hairy chest/
i hope your wearin a vest/
cause your gonna get to slugs to da chest so dont flex/
cause all your friends are next..........................

My verse will be posted shortly.

Good luck.

Check.

You got a head of steam on a train of thought.. But I wrecked it
You dont even throw punches yet you still hope to connect it
You should expect it.. Structures like your get hated automatically
Im punchin' through your apparent defences systematically
Winning emphatically.. Basically you are just pissin in the wind
You look like an ass and then wonder why a donkey tail was pinned
You have sinned.. Son.. Time for you to face up to your wrongs
Your pupils are wide with fear.. Man..
.. It looks like youve been smoking bongs
You write songs not raps.. Couldnt win a battle to save your life
Vocal cords ripped and teared by me.. But it wasnt done by a knife

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Please.
Thank you.
Pz.

ayt Azure takes this by miles man!

Very weak drop Locknes, but keep elevating man, you'll get there

Shit L your flow was all wrong and your structure was fucked, not 1 decent punchline at all man, Azure i was feeling your whole verse man, some good shit there, kept tha flow nice and clean, and structure was good

Other Guy - His verse was crap, that says it all...

Azure - It was an okay verse, but you only had one accual punch in there. The others are just fillers... Work on creativity, most of those attempts have already been done so many times. You did good on structure, but fell off on the rhyme at some points... So just fix up on those things, and you should be straight...
You won this one if it was a battle...

You both voted for me.
Scores are still 0-0.
Can you please poll your votes.
Thanks.

k umm azure got this............................
.............................other cats verse was nonexistent battle wise.........
its like some commom words ne1 could think of that want to be flowed n a song
azure had personals and punchlines which basicly closed the door on this
.........i mean with good punches & personals that shit wins these (text battles)
locknes needs to elavate and focus on his/her oponent more directly
..........................azure had a decent drop & could of came harder i beleive
so imma vote for azure cuz its just apparent he won no questions about it..........
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Uppin this.
Come on people.
Lets get some votes on this.
3-0.

High Class's vote has been polled.

^And I unpolled Destructive's.

Why do you all sleep so much?
:(
Come on.
Up, I guess.

Azure took this one with ease

Lockness work on your structure and try to rap more originally. No1 wants to hear those played out concepts about slugs goin thru ur vest and all that. Try to be more creative and unique. You need 2 work on your punches and get some personals in your verse. Without those you aint got nothin goin 4 u.

Azure you had a tight verse. Good metas. Solid structure. You had some good concepts, i enjoyed reading your verse. pretty creative too! None of your lines were played. Your punches were pretty hard hitting but i dont think u had any personals. Flowed pretty well and you aced the delivery! generally a good verse!

Vote Azure

hey this is sabotage I rated your battle under my account " Agility " as part of my agreement with Ailse Phive to unbann sabotage. I am here now to explain this to you and to
poll vote on the battles i previously analysed.