Tempted

This is my most recent track, peep it and leeme know what you think.

Tempted-Dikk Dastadly

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I a'ready said... shit's hype man... flow is pretty on point... lyrics are funny in a deep kinda way, delivery's pretty good too... 1

Yea, thanks Blunt, good looks man.

safe track...pretty dope beat...lyrics is safe...peep my shit

holla back

beat is good, kinda deep soundin...

flow is nice...delivery could use a little work but it's not bad. lyrics are decent..not bad or overly good either. some of the lyrics are kinda funny...but deep...makes sense...lyrics are clear too...good shit

peace

Aight nice flow.....seemed a little off at times are you readin it?.....either way...i read sometimes....good alliterations....nice beat.......your lyrics seem kina i duno backround...i really have to concentrate through the beat to get em...you might wanna work on making your lyrics have more presence....The lyrics are a little simplistic work on uppin your style and you'll see some nice improvements in your shit all in all nice track i give it a 7/10..........man of my word...pz

iight nice flow....... nice beat ....good lyrics(sometimes alittle blah)........... nice delivery.............. need to wokr on makin ur lyrics make alittle more sense cuz some of ur lyrics were alittle played oout and wack.....
iight give it 8/10

Thanks everyone, feed back is much appreciated. i'ma return the favor if i haven't allready

guitar is sick on the beat. flow is good.. delivery is koo.. quality is ehh.. voice is iight... this is a good track though... keep it up..

pz.

not really my style of beat, but you doin it up nice.
voice is ok, flow is good, ya delivery is ight i mean its there ionno i just aint feel it a lot no beef, ya presence is on, ya lyrics is good, this is a solid track man, you held it down on this, keep it up.

biggin' this up 1ce again for my man dastadly... reppin' ONT.CA to the fullest... BWuAttt...!!!

no doubt Canada WHAT!!! stay rockin the tuke.

but yo thanks for the feedback everyone.

you jump off beat sometimes, but then later in the line you get back on it, kinda choppy, but u still say some ill lines tho

returning the love,as promised

beat-..shit was koo...feelin the guitars...
flow-u mumble sometimes..cant really understand u most of the time,so i cant really critic on ur lyrics,but ur flow is decent..
over all this was an ok drop..keep spittin son..


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the beat is hot. ya quality wuz straight, but its hard to catch the concept of the song, it all seems slurred together. the flow wud be hot if you made your words crisp and complete. sounds like you got too much spit in ya mouth. hawk a couple lougies before you record and you aint gotta do it all in one take either. the parts i did hear aint bad. keep elevatin

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