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30 minutes
dope and in................................................ .........g'dluck.
checked in
heres some advide..
..you can't rap but theres always acting,
but even all the alais masks you pull..
..can't hide the face that is lacking,
its not a hetic experience to get this prick into court,
but fell so far of road he's getting kicked by the sidewalk,
gets unbanned and changes his name..
..but no need to revele him..ill kill him with wisdom,
cause face it he's oviously not keeping his name..
..cause of embarrisment of what hes become,
already killed you once in another one of your mislled names,
hes only hot sometimes..uses me to bring out period panes,
im ill dogg your not..but your the one watching your health,
you should take a leaf outa c-cection,
and concentrate on bringing back yourself.
another win................
The judge....
One love, The judge. I read your Uelogy from 6 feet above.
Quit lie'ing cuz, The only thing your packin is your fudge.
And what?, It's gone....You define your L's-^look there Instant.
Pickin on herbs? Dogg why?, Your the reason for there existance
For instance, son chek it yo Look at your roster..
Then check my past. Yo-I left half of em Fostered!(sonned)
Put a new meaning into foot loose when I size 9 ya gum's loose
elevated Like Tom Cruise, But dropped altitude like you's goose
I'll let you tie ya own noose, cus as you say you rest my case.
An you's my case. so rest, relax, as I deficate ya Face...
-PROSPECT-
The judge....
One love, The judge. I read your Uelogy from 6 feet above.
Quit lie'ing cuz, The only thing your packin is your fudge.
(this is fucking playyyyed. deduction for uber playedness.)
And what?, It's gone....You define your L's-^look there Instant.
Pickin on herbs? Dogg why?, Your the reason for there existance
(Uhh. If you're saying Instant cultivates herbs, than it's an okay personal. But i don't know if you are. So, work on wording man.)
For instance, son chek it yo Look at your roster..
Then check my past. Yo-I left half of em Fostered!(sonned)
(using a different word for sonned is not creative. or wordplay. or a good punch.)
Put a new meaning into foot loose when I size 9 ya gum's loose
elevated Like Tom Cruise, But dropped altitude like you's goose
(uhhh. i guess this is okay. dedicating a whole bar to 80's movies is kind of gay though man. atleast attempt to be hard.)
I'll let you tie ya own noose, cus as you say you rest my case.
An you's my case. so rest, relax, as I deficate ya Face...
(uhh...no.. not at all.)
Tha Judge wins for connecting directly and not leaving me questioning every single one of his punches, -Pros- is kind of rusty it seems.
Vote- Tha Judge
: )
iight..
TJ..
heres some advide..
..you can't rap but theres always acting,
but even all the alais masks you pull..
..can't hide the face that is lacking,
Haha.. Nice personal..
its not a hetic experience to get this prick into court,
but fell so far of road he's getting kicked by the sidewalk,
Lol.. Played.. But nice..
gets unbanned and changes his name..
..but no need to revele him..ill kill him with wisdom,
cause face it he's oviously not keeping his name..
..cause of embarrisment of what hes become,
Slim rhyme.. But it was iight..
already killed you once in another one of your mislled names,
hes only hot sometimes..uses me to bring out period panes,
Not bad..
im ill dogg your not..but your the one watching your health,
you should take a leaf outa c-cection,
and concentrate on bringing back yourself.
Lol.. Not bad again..
Nice flow.. Good personals.. Nice punches.. 7/10
P..
One love, The judge. I read your Uelogy from 6 feet above.
Quit lie'ing cuz, The only thing your packin is your fudge.
Played.. Not bad though..
And what?, It's gone....You define your L's-^look there Instant.
Pickin on herbs? Dogg why?, Your the reason for there existance
Nice personal..
For instance, son chek it yo Look at your roster..
Then check my past. Yo-I left half of em Fostered!(sonned)
Again.. Like Meters said.. Doesnt make wordplay..
Put a new meaning into foot loose when I size 9 ya gum's loose
elevated Like Tom Cruise, But dropped altitude like you's goose
Hmm.. Not feeling it..
I'll let you tie ya own noose, cus as you say you rest my case.
An you's my case. so rest, relax, as I deficate ya Face...
Nice transition.. Not bad threat..
Flow was iight.. Punches lacked.. Your rusty, C.. Not as rusty as me though, damn.. Ive rusty as something thats really rusty.. :).. 5/10
v/ TJ..
Pz..
TJ..
heres some advide..
..you can't rap but theres always acting,
but even all the alais masks you pull..
..can't hide the face that is lacking,
so-so personall......
its not a hetic experience to get this prick into court,
but fell so far of road he's getting kicked by the sidewalk,
played, and doesnt rhyme either
gets unbanned and changes his name..
..but no need to revele him..ill kill him with wisdom,
cause face it he's oviously not keeping his name..
..cause of embarrisment of what hes become,
rhymed off same word twice.....very noobish
already killed you once in another one of your mislled names,
hes only hot sometimes..uses me to bring out period panes,
period pains......workable i guess
im ill dogg your not..but your the one watching your health,
you should take a leaf outa c-cection,
and concentrate on bringing back yourself.
best part of the verse....nice closer
6.5/10
Flow wasnt too bad, structure was good, some punches were played.....some didnt rhyme, some made no sense....personals were nice but not worded to their best ability.....
Prospect......
One love, The judge. I read your Uelogy from 6 feet above.
Quit lie'ing cuz, The only thing your packin is your fudge.
a lil played.....okay opener
And what?, It's gone....You define your L's-^look there Instant.
damn well worded......nice personal......
For instance, son chek it yo Look at your roster..
Then check my past. Yo-I left half of em Fostered!(sonned)
works nice....but not worded or used best.....doesnt rhyme to well either
Put a new meaning into foot loose when I size 9 ya gum's loose
elevated Like Tom Cruise, But dropped altitude like you's goose
i like gums loose line, but wasnt feelin second
I'll let you tie ya own noose, cus as you say you rest my case.
An you's my case. so rest, relax, as I deficate ya Face...
dope closer....nicely used.....
8/10
flowed niceley.......good personals.....punches were workable....some parts were a lil iffy.....but overall good verse.....
v/ Prospect
^lmfao...............banned but uppin for the win.......................................
Jus post it in IR and get the win..
Much quicker..
wanna beat carson for the second time but o/well mite as well........lol........1
- Prospect - is dq'd
he was being dq'd for everything he's done
within the past 2 weeks..
The Judge Wins