Consider this my check in, P.
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So stay away, newbs.
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Consider this my check in, P.
You need 300 post to vote in this battle.
So stay away, newbs.
I'm here Wick. Drop soon.
Check.
*look at his custom title...
I cut p, wrapped him in plastic, & sold this ho
But the crackheads wanted refunds...
........Cause young is only almost dope!*
It’s unanimous, I’ll completely murk this slut
Your gay, & your whole style is ass....
..........No wonder your verse is fucked!
I used a damn “gay” line, but it was still witty
Young’s soft as a bar of ex-lax....
....He’ll win? You gotta be shittin’ me!
I’ll admit, I’m a computer geek and it’s found
That you resemble my mouse...
...cause u always being pushed around!
He’ll probably bite my verse......& taste defeat!
I’ll let him describe himself...
Quote:
Originally Posted by Young P
Wick'll get down on his knees, might as well start pleading the fifth...
Cuz ya verse belongs in the dumpsters...and ironically thats where u live!
Wick pulls new concepts, like making quotes that no one ever said...
Don't worry "We can see that your better....yeah...better off dead!"
This'll be a mutual mourning, I'll let them know I'm sonning you now...
You fucking wack gay bastard...see, Wicked's even humbling me down!
Boulder your shoulder, or rock your jaw, either way I'll leave a brusier...
Cuz you are good enough to battle me...cuz there's always a loser!
Even Sdizzle almost beat you, but I won't hate on you for lacking shit...
Cu when u said stay away, newbs...I was jus happy u came back to spit!
And your done.
HA LOL I won't vote (so I don't sway the rest) but damn... this is funny. I know who won. ;)
My old punch...
your punch...Quote:
Originally Posted by W1CKED
You just added "Dont worry" to my punch!Quote:
Originally Posted by Young P
Also, that quote in my verse is real, I can pm you a link if you want.
Besides that, decent verse.
LOL . No shit...that's why I have yours in " "....dumb ass.
LOL. Holy shit...
Ayo, That was a closer Battle than it looks like
I cut p, wrapped him in plastic, & sold this ho
But the crackheads wanted refunds...
........Cause young is only almost dope!*
^good opener..........Better than good
It’s unanimous, I’ll completely murk this slut
Your gay, & your whole style is ass....
..........No wonder your verse is fucked!
^LOL
I used a damn “gay” line, but it was still witty
Young’s soft as a bar of ex-lax....
....He’ll win? You gotta be shittin’ me!
^yet Another good line
I’ll admit, I’m a computer geek and it’s found
That you resemble my mouse...
...cause u always being pushed around!
^Original.....and funny
He’ll probably bite my verse......& taste defeat!
I’ll let him describe himself...
Quote:
Originally Posted by Young P
i wear panties and i am not elite
^Very good closer...........an end of a Merkin
Wick'll get down on his knees, might as well start pleading the fifth...
Cuz ya verse belongs in the dumpsters...and ironically thats where u live!
^Very weak for an opener
Wick pulls new concepts, like making quotes that no one ever said...
Don't worry "We can see that your better....yeah...better off dead!"
^Much funnier once I found out what it meant
This'll be a mutual mourning, I'll let them know I'm sonning you now...
You fucking wack gay bastard...see, Wicked's even humbling me down!
^eh
Boulder your shoulder, or rock your jaw, either way I'll leave a brusier...
Cuz you are good enough to battle me...cuz there's always a loser!
^Better
Even Sdizzle almost beat you, but I won't hate on you for lacking shit...
Cu when u said stay away, newbs...I was jus happy u came back to spit!
^Very good closer.......Probably your best line
Structure=W1CKED
Flow=W1CKED
Wordplay=W1CKED
Metas=Tie
Harder Hittin=W1CKED
I guess it wasn't as close as I thought.........Young P, You from Philly so I'm gonna give you some advice........Punch wit every line. Bring it all or don't bring it at all.
W1CKED............just like your name, that shit was wicked. Good battle, Both of yas
Vote=W1CKED
Hit up one of my links and drop a vote if you get a chance............
Punches - Young P
Personals - W1CKED
Opener - W1CKED
Multies - Neither
Wordplay - Neither
Structure - Both
Vocab - Neither
Finisher - W1CKED
You've both came alot better than this! This is disgracefull.
W1CKED - decent structure, good flow. Pretty nice personals, Punches hit nicely. Flow was ok.. The whole ""(*) stuff in your verse looked wack. so cut it out! :thumbup:
Young P - i was embarassed for you on this... You had some aight punches, but not that many personals. Your opening line was played as fuck! but anyways.. dont slack next time!
Close battle.. but i gotta give it to W1CKED
He was more consistant.. and his personals were an advantage
V/W1CKED
2...
W1cked pulls this battle off.
W1cked....you came ok. Average verse. Your punches were mostly good except for the gay bar...and you had some filler too. But the punches you did have were effective and hard...you came pretty consistent...not a bad verse overall
YoungP...You came real played man....not much creativity or originality in ya verse...which took away from the effectiveness of ya punches...the quote would been better on a quote form....average verse
Vote=W1cked
iight..
W..
I cut p, wrapped him in plastic, & sold this ho
But the crackheads wanted refunds...
........Cause young is only almost dope!*
Nice personal..
It’s unanimous, I’ll completely murk this slut
Your gay, & your whole style is ass....
..........No wonder your verse is fucked!
Haha.. Nice wordplay.. Made me laugh..
I used a damn “gay” line, but it was still witty
Young’s soft as a bar of ex-lax....
....He’ll win? You gotta be shittin’ me!
Eh..
I’ll admit, I’m a computer geek and it’s found
That you resemble my mouse...
...cause u always being pushed around!
Haha.. Wordplay.. Nice..
He’ll probably bite my verse......& taste defeat!
I’ll let him describe himself...
Quote:
Originally Posted by Young P
i wear panties and i am not elite
Nice personal.. Sort of.. Lol..
Some nice punches in here.. Was feeling the nice structure and nice length lines.. 7/10
P..
Wick'll get down on his knees, might as well start pleading the fifth...
Cuz ya verse belongs in the dumpsters...and ironically thats where u live!
Played..
Wick pulls new concepts, like making quotes that no one ever said...
Don't worry "We can see that your better....yeah...better off dead!"
Plaigorise his line why dont you.. Lol.. Wierd shit..
This'll be a mutual mourning, I'll let them know I'm sonning you now...
You fucking wack gay bastard...see, Wicked's even humbling me down!
Nice..
Boulder your shoulder, or rock your jaw, either way I'll leave a brusier...
Cuz you are good enough to battle me...cuz there's always a loser!
Nice.. Second line was anyway..
Even Sdizzle almost beat you, but I won't hate on you for lacking shit...
Cu when u said stay away, newbs...I was jus happy u came back to spit!
Haha.. Liked it..
Some stretched lines. Found it hard to catch a flow in places.. 6/10
Close shit, but..
v/ W..
Hit the OM in my sig..
Thanks..
Pz..
Real close battle...
Don't see the reason for the bite on his line though, P...
Overall, just much wittier, and much more oif a "clown you" verse by Wicked.
P came pretty stretched, kinda unusual from you...
They both had a few played concepts, but Wick was able to flip them with wit, P...wasn't as successful.
To me, Wick's "mouse" line and closer just killed this.
"Ex Lax" concept was a bit rehashed, but flipped in a really clever way.
Kinda easy to see for me...
Wicked
Peace
Vote Wicked
Young- You Came Nice, YOur PUnches Were On Target, And Your Personals Were Decent...Your Flow Was There, And Creativity Was Ok..YOur Consistency Was Ehh..Off And On..YOur Wordplay Was Decent TOo...Nice STructure Also...Overall 8/10, Nice Verse
Wicked- You Blew Up..Your Punches COnnected Hard, And Your Opening Personal Was My Fav Line..Your Flow Was Nice Along With Nice WOrdplay.. Your Vocab Was Ok..And Creativity Was Nice. Your Consistency Was Same As P's, And Your STructure Was NIce Too...Overall 8.5/10 You Came WIth A Better Verse..
Vote- Wicked
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