- Juss A Quick Thing -

I attack then erase the memory of every enemy,
Come with aerial attacks, snap lyrical banks heavily,
I fight with words that are too obserd for an average rapper,
Bitch slapper, Rap Attacker, Grown Slacker, Word Jacker,
Known hacker, of other rappers punch lines,
Eat Mc's for lunch time, im that one dime,
That could kill a whole crew with just one line,
Defeat Lyricists until i see the sun shine,
My Minds in two ways, two different sections,
One gives me lyrics, and the other gives irrections,
I spit at my reflection, because i see my brother,
Lazy Assed Mother, and my two timing lover,
One Bit after another, my life is swept underground,
Im fighting every memory, until im outta pounds,
I Drink until im pissed, stuck to my right wrist,
Awnser every question every day with my white fist.

Yo some of this shit comes straight from the heart. Hope You Peeps Feelin This.

PE@CE

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