"ME" if yall like 50 cent you definetly gon like this fuh real cuzz...

damn, im a gangsta, please dont none yall white boys hate im probably the most skilled cat on this board... damn... check it out, it's called me...

1st verse:
Yall niggas, know how I do it, if you don't I already did
it (what?)
Kickit wit ya baby's momma and leave, I aint
commited (AHH)
It's scandaluz, cuz, Rica wanna follow a G...
I aint from G-Unit baby but I'm a P-I-M-P!!(YEA!)

From the coast, where us thug nigguz gon do it the
most (uhhuh)
the type of drink that Ryan and Donald Trump gon
Toast!
The type that make us party, Hey cuz, where the
bacardi?! (go shawty)
The type that shawty gon sip on right befo things
get naughty!

My CD release, basically, it's just me (ME)
fake punk bustas droppin bombs, i call them MC'S (fuck em)
You think you make cheese takin em 20 g's a week,
i get about half that and get me something to EAT (HAHA)

Ya shady man, you aint never in my level, (NEVA)
SHIT the day that ever happens, hea, take this
SHOVEL, (take it)
I make 1, fuck it, bitchi I makin Doubles, I
aint fakin when it's there Im gon take it turn it
to TROUBLE! (Mothafucka)

to be continued bustas...

Im the rillest.. fuck it yall cant c me, aint none you white boys wanna battle...

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Well I'm mixed so I get to "hate" halfway. Noticed some ok rhymes - better quality the most of the "gangsters" on here. I would suggest working on complicating your scheme somewhat. It really helps self praise pieces if you display more than just ok talent. You said you didn't want any advice about content and whatnot so I won't give it - Hit my ELEETE collab if you get a chance. (Two Geniuses - One Mind)

dude shut the fuck up...note not everyone on here is a "white boy"
man i woulda been nice but u try coming in here like ur something great...
u blow, period. trying to rap like 50 is gay...his lyrics suck kiddo..
and so do urs

yeah this was eghhh i hurt my eyes readin it...hahahah

but anyways keep writing something is bound to tunr around

maybe

You blow like a hairdryer..

^That right there had more wordplay than your verse.. AND.. That^ was actually true.. Haha..

Try again.. :)..

not great, and please dont blow, only blow if ya KNOW ur good, but okay vocab, and wordplay, 6/10

I dont feel 50 much, but this was Ok, the whole "stuntin" thing is already played out to me

no, your just a herb..
homo-thug

Its not hard to follow the rules, ..

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