Lex Luther - can u spot the hidden meaning?

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The light...The Truth...

In the land of the heartless, a hero must protect
Both in his actions and in his soothing dailect
While under the ground an enemy threats to surface
And all the hero's powers end deceased and worthless

The plea...

People say the enemy must change his side to light
Stop fighting for freedom for the darkness of night
But in despair, anguish and malnurishmental times
The enemy's energy multiplies so he can commit his crimes
A helpless whisper plagues the city, unheard by the untrained ear
The dark cloud over commerciality, The true One fear
How will they get out of here, without the fate of death?
Will the fall of the city co-incide with the hero's last breath?

The enemy surfaces...

I am the arch enemy of the hero, I strive for what is mine
This joy and happiness to my eyes seems to be devine
But I will end this State of glee, Surrounder at my wrath
The soldier's from the endless pit, attack with my craft
A heartless laugh,a desperate whisper from an innocent soul
But I don't feel remorse, I'm here for what the hero stole
The world will see my claim, the unmistakable horror
Of my anguish of being kept in the dark depths of squalor

The Villain dies (Metaphoric Truths?)...

Truthfully this is my view on hip-hop, can't mistake the truth
An over-commercialised reality, the underground id through
Too many "teeny-boppers" listen to "hip-hop" in their room
Only true hip-hop heads know we're heading for doom
Too many of my kind underrated, many losers over-rated too
Underground stays breathimg silently, commercail livin thru
But don't let the pop charts kill everything I learned to love
Embrace true lyricists..not over hyped losers..acting over smug.



If u know what I'm getting across.....
Props 2 U....



( The villain is underground hip-hop
trying to gain exposure...Hero is
the hero for teny boppers and commercial rap)

This Is A Clever Verse K.

I Dont Know Wether Sum Of The Heads On Here Will Understand Wot Ur Tryin To Say Tho

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Man - you would have to be seriously challenged to not get it - you explained it at the end - twice. I thought that was what you were talking about when you mentioned at the beginning about the "enemy" lurking "under ground". I liked your take on this pretty common subject. The whole idea of the hero being popular rap. Nice job of realizing it's all about perspective. Nice lines:

"A heartless laugh,a desperate whisper from an innocent soul
But I don't feel remorse, I'm here for what the hero stole"
Structure was good and so was flow mostly - I noticed one or two lines that seemed to have syllables off a little - but good overall. Nice work - keep writing. Hit my ELEETE collab if you haven't already. (Two Geniuses - One Mind)

uppin.....Darius Style

Thats was a good rap with a good point. I liked how you kept the whole thing a metaphor.

yea i knew what u were gettin at before u told us at da end...
quite obvious though...
kept my attention thrughout da whole piece
good drop

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uppin...........feedbak.........

sic post......the whole metaphorical meanings idea was ill........great structure......it got me wantin' to read more...a rare thing with so many whack posts on here. hopefully in reality the villain will prevail????

This was more of a poem to me by the way it flowed. Anyways....

I guess you can compare this to Common's "I Used To Love HER" since the symbolism is practically all the same. The rhyming seemed to be unnecessary and it was kept to a simple minimum.

It really wasn't hard at all to figure out what you were talking about.