How Many Faces

The faceted crystal reflects light that fragments
Dispersing in directions depending on the strength
Its powers immense, from tense to evil, hateful and good
With many of its perceptions misunderstood
It has extremes, cos it’s drought as well as flash floods
And its dreams and nightmares dripping in blood
Ripping like it should and shouldn’t but it does
Cos peeps are different, so’s what gives them a buzz
Yes, some’s strange love, other’s straight down the line
A vast range is present from adolescents doing crime
To gentle giants never defiant, giving no reason to do time
So get this rhyme, a face can lie, a smile can be faked
And a split personality can partake in many shapes
But that doesn’t tell you trust should be brushed away
Cos 99% of our race is safe, their personalities sane
Yet the insane have a way of placing people in shells
From outgoing to recluse, jus from how the News delves
But remember more go to heaven than go to hell
So there’s no dilemma, live… forget them and live well


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ahh fuck sake man.. Not again.. Fuck you biatch..










Why you keep droppin good shit?

Lol.. :).. This was good Devster.. Flowed good through-out.. Inner multi's and rhymes.. Nice.. So on and so on..

Honestly.. Cant find something to critisize.. Maybe this will do.. For something that was so short.. It took me ages to read the damn thing.. Dont know why.. Just did.. Thats all the "critisizm" a can think of..

Well done..

Hit the link in my sig..

Thanks..

Pz..

thnx... but come on peeps quit sleeping... your all young, not old men..lmao

*Stares in awe* Dope D......just plain dope....you imagery was outstanding.....I could picture an see everything you mentioned....dope......

Everything was on fire in this piece......your vocab was vocabulary is very deep.....makes for a great read....I can't critisize nothing.....cause everything here was well done.....

Never a dissapointment reading one of your pieces....always great.....good job once again......

^^lol....thnx.... no need to be too praise'ful........ but i am dope so...lmao

Nice piece - It felt like something a father might say to his child - kinda instructional - thought that was good. Conveyed your point in a short time. Flow was nice, vocab was good. One thing the closing line said live twice which made it worded a little oddly. Nice work from you once again however - Hit my ELEETE collab if you get a chance. (Two Geniuses - One Mind) Peace

^^i hear what ya saying, but if ya read thru proprery.. its the style.... in an odd way

Sorry I wasn't clear - I liked the tone you used. I edited the above post.

np man.... thnx

Lol..Dont get too carried awya with ur "Dopeness"...I mean 5-1...Rediculous....

Anyway, Props on this man...

Its another one i like from you...Iv seen u elevate allot in the last week...(Not saying that u needed to, But with that mouth of urs, i think u should, maybe, a little bit...Cuz its me and you soon sonny boy..!!)

U used fine vocab, U used the right amount...In places where it was most affective...

U use more and more internals and multies each time...Wich is nice...

I liked it...

Ohh, Hope u havin fun in Crufts man...

^^ it took 6 fucking hours to get there and 6 getting back...FUCK...lol.... other than that it was good..... oh and thnx for the feedback, but id concentrate on your writing, cos i aint slacking with our nrxt confrontation... lmao

Lol....^^

Well see Hombre..!!!

^^sure will.....upp

upp.... cos i cant be fucked to post another tonight....lol...thnx to those who reply

well done. good use of vocab, multis. this was a good read. short enough to keep interest, but long enough to get the point across. cant really think of an area for you to improve on, except maybe wordplay? nice drop.