Me Vs JONESY_UK

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10 lines quicky

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ok man nothin special but here goes...............



Yo listen YuSindSun, yeh im JONESY im from da UK//
I aint takin shit from yo ass kid, so listen to wha I gotta say//
Quick YuSindSun hand me my crown and bow down//
Cos this white boy is takin u out u clown//
First off get yaself on da fukin floor//
Kiss my ass, den my feet , pray for your life and leave through da back door//
Ya gotta betta chance in rollin a 50 with one dice than u have rippin me//
Cos technically ya rhymes cannot defeat me as you can see//
Ya love my freestyles so much ya readin um as a habbit//
But trust me youngsta once I pop ma collar u’ll become an addict//

"Oops I think i see Elton John"

*Hi Fruitcake*

-You from UK like prince Williams you getting exposed, like when 380 was caught screwing his Neices-
-my shit is like `microscopic genitals`, you can `try` but you just can't Beat This-

-Consume entities to prophesize annihilation, `Urinate` in `your direction` like I'm `Pissed~At You-
-eeww The Queen surrounded by `dis`respect, Plus you `Fake` It'd be a shame to call Dis A britishCrew-
-This Weak battle reminds me of a certain `Movie`, except the Empire` doesn't Strike Back-
-Bitch you couldn't `find your way`around a `one-page site` if you had a Site Map-


I dont even need to finish.


Vote peepz.

Good battle "UPPUN"

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this was a pretty weak battle...we can battle again soon if ya want..


anyway vote guyz

iight
fav line from jonesy:

Quote:

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Quick YuSindSun hand me my crown and bow down//
Cos this white boy is takin u out u clown//

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fav line from yun:

Quote:

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You from UK like prince Williams you getting exposed, like when 380 was caught screwing his Neices-
-my shit is like `microscopic genitals`, you can `try` but you just can't Beat This-

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breakdown:
sturucture:jonesy
flow:yun
mutlies:no one
punchlines:none
wordplay:yun
v/ yun
PLEASE RETURN THE FAVOR

UppUN #1

I have to say Please hit the "Polls" and yea take time to read it.........................................

Uppun #2

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C'mon Now Ama return the favor VOte plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz Honest Votes..................

here be the breakdown lol

JONESY UK

Yo listen YuSindSun, yeh im JONESY im from da UK//
I aint takin shit from yo ass kid, so listen to wha I gotta say//

weak opener

Quick YuSindSun hand me my crown and bow down//
Cos this white boy is takin u out u clown//

really bad punch, no personal

First off get yaself on da fukin floor//
Kiss my ass, den my feet , pray for your life and leave through da back door//

lmao weak punch, played

Ya gotta betta chance in rollin a 50 with one dice than u have rippin me//
Cos technically ya rhymes cannot defeat me as you can see//

played, didnt make sence

Ya love my freestyles so much ya readin um as a habbit//
But trust me youngsta once I pop ma collar u’ll become an addict//

bad closer, note:use sum personals
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YuSindSun

-You from UK like prince Williams you getting exposed, like when 380 was caught screwing his Neices-
-my shit is like `microscopic genitals`, you can `try` but you just can't Beat This-

an ok opener, good personal

-Consume entities to prophesize annihilation, `Urinate` in `your direction` like I'm `Pissed~At You-
-eeww The Queen surrounded by `dis`respect, Plus you `Fake` It'd be a shame to call Dis A britishCrew-

good punch, good personal

-This Weak battle reminds me of a certain `Movie`, except the Empire` doesn't Strike Back-
-Bitch you couldn't `find your way`around a `one-page site` if you had a Site Map-

an ok closer but didnt rhrme
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structure-JONESY
flow-JONESY
punches-Yu
personals-Yu
opener-Yu
closer-JONESY

my vote goes to YuSindSun

Thnx I apreciate it ama hit yo battle up.

lets review

jON_uk:what up man,look you did good but your structure was prety weak and your punchlines was not well.But you got some good metaphores kid,so elavate more
heres my fav lines
"Ya love my freestyles so much ya readin um as a habbit//
But trust me youngsta once I pop ma collar u’ll become an addict//"
Yusund:what up,look you got the structure good and had a good flow with that so nice.the only thing that held you back was the end,but either way you had a good battle.
here is my fav line
"-This Weak battle reminds me of a certain `Movie`, except the Empire` doesn't Strike Back-
-Bitch you couldn't `find your way`around a `one-page site` if you had a Site Map-"

so my vote goes to
Yusindsun

yo if this kids banned does it mean i win the battle......................