Uk Hip Hop

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Check it out guys its UK HIPHOP/
Its been behind closed doors but now its ready ta drop/
And I kid you not, this is the real rappers delight!
Yo guys before ya say shit yeh I am white/
But hell man it aint bout ya race/
Its about the shit ya write/
It aint about where ya grew up or where ya rep/
Cos I grew up in great brits/
And im still rippin yall asses ta fukin bits/
So ya roll round with ya gun in ya car? So wo..
I roll round with my fists and they’ll break ya fukin jaw/
And I aint a gangsta, and I don’t pretend to be/
I don’t roll up to guys with guns and shot every bitch that disses me/
I don’t deal crack and other shit in da streets I live/
I do thinks I regret like kick da fuk outta bitches and never forgive/
I reppin in da U.K with a lot of my boys/
We had some downfalls but many fukin joys/
U.K aint one of da top three for HIPHOP music/
But guys until ya listened to it don’t abuse it/
There are many talents up in this little ass country/
And some nearly matchin BIGGIE trust me/
Its hard for us brits to show off our rhymes/
Cos we aint been through gang murders and aint been shot 9 times/
But yall should respect how us guys work so much we go mad/
All we ask for is a chance. Now is that so fukin hard?/

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This wasn't as bad as it could have been
Played out subject etc. But ya did have some
good flow.
Ya just lacked depth in ya subject.
Suggest ya just write more & Incorporate
more Vocab' in ya verse to make it more
than 2D

Props tho..good try!

Oh & where in Uk ya from
I'm from Manchester

yo man im from wrexham, its in wales....bout 45mins drive from manchester...

thanx for props man

Flow was pretty good - vocab could use some improvemnt. Ok subject for your first piece. Thought this was funny:

And I aint a gangsta, and I don’t pretend to be/
I don’t roll up to guys with guns and shot every bitch that disses me/
I don’t deal crack and other shit in da streets I live/
I do thinks I regret like kick da fuk outta bitches and never forgive

Just because you said you're not a "gangsta" and then you started talking about how you beat ppl up.

Keep writing and elevating - Hit my Lamentations if you get a chance.

meh...I believe if you keep droppin your shit will elevate...decent piece...keep dropping..

I lived in Wrexham... =D Most of my life...(since i was 1 till i was 8..)

Ill feed later man....

Yo It Was Ok, Bit Basic But Biggup Yourself For Representing The Uk. Biggup All The South London Thugs!

^^Word, big yourself up nigga

T'was nice... tha structure blew... you need to work on that... cus I threw your flow off real badd, plus, you need to up ur vocab, to increase tha content of tha piece... no hate

Reply to ma thread 'Confessions Of A Thugz Mind' thanks...

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