ak mixa vs. vane

no limit to number of lines(MUST BE ABOVE OR 10 AT LEAST)
no recycling
no feeding
no biting
no crew or d/r votes
1 hour to think of a verse

agree to deez terms and check in............good luck....

Chizzeck

should be done in a bit....good lukk

vane is already competing against being non par....futile repetitions carries him far?
cranes and solar flares couldn't help him drop hot bars...sealing rhymes in jelly jars?
doctors can't fix his emotional and mental scars...tearing him limb from limb all apart
V's rap far off like pluto and universal stars...hitting him as bullseye targets with darts
i'm a pan out da 300 degree oven, non tangible by hands....hoe should of been banned
nigga's getting washed out like tide been used on my pants...frightened to go but ran
red ink ain't da only shit flowing through bleeding lines...while immobilizing his spine
da paraplegic posted on blocks with hov-a-round signs...only paralyzed pussy in time
vane spell your ass with an I without da e pimpin....ya watch died and life ain't tickin
nigga in RB worst legends naked and limpin....for da hits I was hitting and bars strippin

yo yo yo.......
*stops the waitin*
we be debatin, will vane have ye out of breath like lung displacement?//
and a-k can't handle the heat on his body like eskimo's on vacation//
ask-a-vet.. vane'll have ye bars closed down like fuckin alkatraz//
'A' couldn't come first if we was rappin to the alphabet//
rappers flee, perminantly see cos i got ki's (key's) that a dope//
typin ish up, an you always cummin after I like the letter O//(keyboard)
its simple and plain, i got vanes that'll touch the vain on ye nekk//
am playin with-a-tech, in this race am number one like lanes on the left//*
come to this battle on the school bus, am brutul, according to survivers//
vane'll have you hittin more barriers than blind formula one drivers//
have you in the dumpster, pull out a four and bust at bins//
count my wins... another 'match' that ive ended like a gust of wind//**

*race track...lane one is on the left, 2 second to left..and so on
**just incase you didnt understand this is a match as in one you light...

my bad i went to get sumpin to eat half way through

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uppin.... if you want feedbakk vote, juss drop a link

Nice battle but quite hard to decide. I think vane just got the better of ak. Vane had smooth punches that i enjoyed reading, i think ak had nice punches but didnt seem to be hard hitting like vanes. Ak just needed a better flow cos i couldnt get to grips with it. Both had nice multis.

vote = vane

Nice i got to agree with slayer vane came harder in this battle maybe it was an off day for ak but this battle was not hiting on much u know but i can say that vane have this battle hands down

flow,wordplay,mutis, meta4s, punches, structure = vane

personals, cravtivy not much, vocab = Ak

Overall=ak

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Feeble Minded

i thank you for the votes, will repay when i have time -- hold me to it

2-0 uppin

lol ok then 1-0.. blah im not really bothered about votes though, nice battle A-k, keep elevatin

here it is

Metaphores:both
punchlines:vane
structure:vane
flavor:both
overall:vane
best line

Quote:

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come to this battle on the school bus, am brutul, according to survivers//
vane'll have you hittin more barriers than blind formula one drivers//

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v/vane

lol i agree^^^ ak im not frontin but u did have a tight verse but ya vocab and structure was so simple from my point of view while you were spitin lil simple rythmes vane was usein killa vocab against you he also had way better punches but ak your verse was full of multis which ended in streched lines i wasnt feelin dat

vote/vane

plz return the favor in my battle against Diverged

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^^^^^^^well..........i know i lost......dis time i couldn't think of anything.....so.....big deal....plus dis da first time I ate and put off my rhymes when da thread was started......all in all no matter what I agree i lost......it'll jus make me better in future battles.......thanks for da input......anyways

Punches: Vain
Metas: Vain
Creativity: Mixa
Flow: Vain
Structure: Vain
Vote: Vain

Vain had 2 punches i liked, the eskimos won it for him

please hit this up honestly u too,k sorry i cant poll eh, thanks

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=117412

damn, i can see this battles been on here for a while.

well vote goes to AK

reasons:
Ak- u had a good verse mayne. I liked the flow, easily red, and the structure and punches were all good as well. Both verses were actually pretty good. U came better with the personals and u had more of them.

vane- good verse as well. U had a well structured verse. I like the flow as well. every thing else was either average or alittle below. U didnt have it in this battle this time. Lines seemed alittle stretch. Its weird, Ak looks like he had some long ass lines, but they didnt sound stretch, on the other hand urs did, and ur lines were shorter, but wutever.

Vote-AK

but good battle to both