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Verses due by NEXT Friday, I put the matches up now for more exposure to check in.
Check ins are due next Wednesday. If you don't check in there will be a replacement.
No show verses will not be permitted, if you drop a no show verse and the other person shows before the deadline you will not be allowed to edit your verse. Please don't wait for the last minute to drop, drop as early as you can.
Agree on a line limit of 10-20 lines, nothing more nor less.
uhh.. totally forgot about this.. but im checking in..
ya chances of winnin are gone in a instant...there’s no need to look
lethal u couldnt drop hot lines if u was a spiral notebook
u got a lethal injection of whackness and there aint a antidote
last time lethal tried to swallow illness...it got caught in his throat
dont try to join LLL cuz even in LLL jr. u wont ever win shit
in this battle im walkin over u more than pedestrians do pavement
ya crew is instantly whack..they are by far the weakest crew on RB
u a horrible MC...u couldnt sell ya album if u gave it out for free
u claim to be ill but when it comes to elite victories u have none
talk about starting with a bang...u just started ya LLL jr career 0-1
sry so late.. had 12 lines, but noticed u did 10 so i got rid of one..
If this wack owned a free porn website, he still couldnt land a hit..
I would deficate on E.Coli, but his verse wasnt worth a shit..
All ya lines was predictible wit non-real personals..
You'z creative just like a Ms. Cleo Infomercial..
You'll never get me cause all of ya punches delivered late..
You takin me out is more like Aines out on a real date..
Munch on this chump and proceed with his crews destruction..
Nuc there foundation and leave E's brains under contruction..
Did you know E.Coli is a bacterium, and he's about to be beat..
Cause this little Executive wanna-be vet cant stand the heat..
[color=red]Explanations:
-bar 2.. Ms. Cleo was obviously fake, and if they arent real, then there fake as was Ms. Cleo..
-bar 3.. if u know what Mc Aines looks like, you will understand.. killer bar if u ask me..
-bar 5.. e.coli is a bacteria aka bacterium.. and it dies when its in heat.. awesome personal..
lets get the votes in.. btw, is there a rule where i have to vote in all other battles? didnt wanna flood the thread with replies so i put it in here.. thanx.. good luck E..
Ok. I'm doing this in a much easier style. Like so. (All scores are out of 5)
ya chances of winnin are gone in a instant...there’s no need to look
lethal u couldnt drop hot lines if u was a spiral notebook
Bad. Nothing witty. (2)
u got a lethal injection of whackness and there aint a antidote
last time lethal tried to swallow illness...it got caught in his throat
Lil bit better. Ok punch. (3.5)
dont try to join LLL cuz even in LLL jr. u wont ever win shit
in this battle im walkin over u more than pedestrians do pavement
Um. Nahh...not hard. (2.5)
ya crew is instantly whack..they are by far the weakest crew on RB
u a horrible MC...u couldnt sell ya album if u gave it out for free
Elementary rhymes. (2)
u claim to be ill but when it comes to elite victories u have none
talk about starting with a bang...u just started ya LLL jr career 0-1
Umm. I guess it's ok? (3)
E. Coli:13/25
If this wack owned a free porn website, he still couldnt land a hit..
I would deficate on E.Coli, but his verse wasnt worth a shit..
Hmm.Ok concept. (3.5)
All ya lines was predictible wit non-real personals..
You'z creative just like a Ms. Cleo Infomercial..
Played. Horrible punch and bar. (1)
You'll never get me cause all of ya punches delivered late..
You takin me out is more like Aines out on a real date..
Why diss Aines? You're battling e coli? (2)
Munch on this chump and proceed with his crews destruction..
Nuc there foundation and leave E's brains under contruction..
Not good. (2.5)
Did you know E.Coli is a bacterium, and he's about to be beat..
Cause this little Executive wanna-be vet cant stand the heat..
(.5) On account that was the worst punch that I've seen. ever.
LethalNJections:9.5/25
E Coli Wins
first of lmao @ lethal
having those explainations
in his verse. iight back
on topic. E had some
played lines but had
one hard hittin punch
but it was still played.
Lethal had nothing
but played conepts
in hus verse and some
of them were terrible.
E Won this due to
consistency and
his punches hit
much harder.
V/E.Coli
Winner= Ecoli
Lethal- You Came Ok, Not To Great, Your Punches Were Ok, And Flow Was Decent, Wordplay Lacked, And Vocab Was Ok. Wasnt Feelin Ya Verse Too much, Put Some Creativity In iT.
Ecolie- Ok Vesre, Your Punches Hit, And your Flow Was Pretty Nice, And Wordplay Was Ok, Vocab Was Ok Aswell, Ok/Nice Verse, Keep It Up, Creativity Was Ok, U Can Come Harder
Vote- Ecoli
ya chances of winnin are gone in a instant...there’s no need to look
lethal u couldnt drop hot lines if u was a spiral notebook
^hmm.......well..it was a good setup..punch came a little weak.....
u got a lethal injection of whackness and there aint a antidote
last time lethal tried to swallow illness...it got caught in his throat
^heheh ok this is good wordplay.....and a funny punch..i liked...
dont try to join LLL cuz even in LLL jr. u wont ever win shit
in this battle im walkin over u more than pedestrians do pavement
^ok a kool meta4 and a punch....nice bar good use of your lines...
ya crew is instantly whack..they are by far the weakest crew on RB
u a horrible MC...u couldnt sell ya album if u gave it out for free
^eheh ouch....well its been done...but it still stings......
u claim to be ill but when it comes to elite victories u have none
talk about starting with a bang...u just started ya LLL jr career 0-1
_^hmmm ok closer...the punch hit him in elite..but...yea..._________________
If this wack owned a free porn website, he still couldnt land a hit..
I would deficate on E.Coli, but his verse wasnt worth a shit..
^second line is mad played......first line is Ok....
All ya lines was predictible wit non-real personals..
You'z creative just like a Ms. Cleo Infomercial..
^creative and fake....meh not such a direct connection between the two..
You'll never get me cause all of ya punches delivered late..
You takin me out is more like Aines out on a real date..
^bahahha but your not battling aines....so ....no...
Munch on this chump and proceed with his crews destruction..
Nuc there foundation and leave E's brains under contruction..
^i assume thats Nuke.....ok wordplay...kind of filler....not really a punch..
Did you know E.Coli is a bacterium, and he's about to be beat..
Cause this little Executive wanna-be vet cant stand the heat..
^ok this is a good use of your knowledge of biology and an ok punch...
Overall E-coli takes this because Lethal came too played which is a shame because i expected this one to be a close battle.....good battle guys...peace..
ya chances of winnin are gone in a instant...there’s no need to look
lethal u couldnt drop hot lines if u was a spiral notebook
ok...kinda weak
u got a lethal injection of whackness and there aint a antidote
last time lethal tried to swallow illness...it got caught in his throat
ok..kinda played
dont try to join LLL cuz even in LLL jr. u wont ever win shit
in this battle im walkin over u more than pedestrians do pavement
good meta
ya crew is instantly whack..they are by far the weakest crew on RB
u a horrible MC...u couldnt sell ya album if u gave it out for free
weak
u claim to be ill but when it comes to elite victories u have none
talk about starting with a bang...u just started ya LLL jr career 0-1
good
If this wack owned a free porn website, he still couldnt land a hit..
I would deficate on E.Coli, but his verse wasnt worth a shit..
blah
All ya lines was predictible wit non-real personals..
You'z creative just like a Ms. Cleo Infomercial..
whack
You'll never get me cause all of ya punches delivered late..
You takin me out is more like Aines out on a real date..
ok
Munch on this chump and proceed with his crews destruction..
Nuc there foundation and leave E's brains under contruction..
blah
Did you know E.Coli is a bacterium, and he's about to be beat..
Cause this little Executive wanna-be vet cant stand the heat..
ok...kinda weak
E coli takes this...more punches...kind of a weak battle overall...Both could step it up in the later rounds...Come with less played lines and such
Vote= E.coli
lethal bit....... lethal bit.......... http://www.rapboard.com/showthread.php?t=12871
look at ecliptics verse
Damn he did bite
damn he did, an the worst thing to bite as well,
e.coli took this one pretty easily in my eyes his punches hit harder, both had okay verse, but colis had everytihng a little better that edged it for him, punches, personals, metas etc etc
vote- e.coli
well damn....lethal you just didn't drop that hard, came with too many played concepts and weak punches and personals, flow was okay but your verse just didn't having anything to set you apart really
e.coli-seen you drop better before but you definitely dropped good enough to take this battle with ease...better wordplay, decent punches and personals, verse came together not bad at alll
v/e.coli
e.coli wins (1-0)
LethalNJectionz loses (0-1) and I will see about IP banning his ass.