Quelude VS SDIZZLE

alright
minimum 6 barz MAX 10 Barz (12-20 lines.. but u knew that)
no feedin, dickriding, crew/hate

no spit first or second, just post a verse

tell this fag to mind his own business and just let me be
but he begged to dick ride, does anythin he can in battles to suck-seed
I'll rip you in bunches, your rhymes are 'crap' and I 'run shit'..
You'll be done quick, I've jacked off 'harder' than your 'punches'
yous a fake, makin~up~lies, bout’ the phrases he ‘played’gerized,
your punches are like pussys tryin ta stay~alive, the way they escape~yer~eye
I'm Charmed as Savage mah Skillz Surpass urs Easy wit Equistic Defying Realistic Demizing...
Quelude betta than Mines??i'll make you ~Swallow ya Pride~ like ~Cannabilistic Lions
Watch it, My verse is Monumental An ~Eiffel(eye full)~Tower Maybe That Distinctly Changes Your Surroundings To Make it like You Died in France,
Ask The Doctors for the Results, Cause I M clearly better then U like ~eye-exams~,
U Musta Missed This, U Wack, Not Even Sick With a Bad Case Of Syphlis,
I'll End Ya ~Exsistance~ Cuz Quel Has No ~Presence (presents)~ like a Jewish Kid On Christmas
Im Spitten ~Red-Hot~ Hits Causeing ~Head Shots~ That Shred Tops Like ~Mislead Cops~
This Kids Dead Knocked, Cuz I Did Tha Oppisite Of His ~Genitals~ I Made This Thread ~Drop

i know u aint gonna stand me up for this battle

Shit.....we ain;t even agree..i said you set it up and obviously you did but i never checked in or nothing...I'll drop but i got shit to do...I got to pick up a bitch right quick so I'll get at you later... For anyone reading this thread: Check the bitchslap....I wasn't even sure he would accept my challenge. I'll be back.

o no doubt, my bizzle

Yeah...yo "bizzle"...I'm a go ahead and key up real quick and serve this fucking herb.

nigga i know YOU aint talkin shit......... just key sumthin up lil bitch ass nigga

S Dizzle..S Dot..All over Sean Carter's jock!
Your rhymes is faker than butter by the maker's of country crock
Cause my philosophy Is merk or be merked by a whack emcee
Ya death's confirmed at check in..now I'm re-writing history
Take a minute to breathe....oops ya dead I stole ya breath!
Verse took a minute to read..and I could tell you stole ya text
When your recieved..you hear the crickets and leaves..yo go figure
Your more hated than B-Rad yelling.."I'm one Bad NIGGER!" (malibu's most Wanted)
And tell me where in the fuck could you find this "Dirty Bean"
The same place you'll find a site where this herb's 17-3
You wish ya bitch ass could flow...you~show~ya~wordplay~like~this
Need some get up and go? Get you a line out my sig..
That's the only way you'd have the energy to compete....
I got to grab my bitch and eat..I'll leave this verse incomplete.

uppin 1

jus didn't like all the capitals and symbols and junk in sdizzles... much easier to read the other one... he came at you pretty hard sdizzle and you lacked personals... i thought you had a better vocab on the argument... but that ish don't matter when his structure is so much clearer than yours...

vote = quelude

uppin 2

yo nice battle you 2..............quelude damn MAN INSTANT..............................woot........n o cnt vote im in ques crew but jst stopped to say nice battle..............http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...ighlight=judge

Punches-SDizzle
Personals-Quelude very nice
Flow-Quelude
Structure-Quelude like magificent said it was much easier to understand
wordplay-SDizzle
Vocab-ehhh SDizzle
Overall-Tied

this is a close battle but i feel this should go to Quelude because of his structure and his personals

Vote/Quelude

o yea not 2 freepost but ill vost poll wise when i get enough posts iight pz!

yall niggas voting for him cuz of his structure...... lol wut has the world come to