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10 lines
35 minutes till drop...
check in now
no recycling.....key fresh...
no c h dr votes..
you kno the drill......
checking in........
yup, check check, i know the rules.........good luck
You lackin variety, and you think your skills are Diverse...?
Smack & rewind D, one bar sends ur reputation in reverse!
Go ahead & rehearse, then see how bad this keystyle hurts....
Nice rap merks, the type that jerks & works to son this herb!
Run with Acro Nims, I'll capture them & manufacture sins....
Fracture limbs, rip off ya face write noob & re-attatch the skin!
That's to prewarn herbs you try to battle ...on a daily basis...
No real flow, you go four more holes than John Daly wasted!
You gettin more pitty laughs than Ben Stiller now a days...
Ur punches are off on holiday, & u used filler to rhyme away!
Your outlook's becoming grim...hope you don't fear death
Better be ambitious if u don't want to make a(n) L your next step
Can't make an executive decision when i corrupt your vision
I know your an exec but we downsized, and cut out your position
So now you can really take over, homeless shelter needs a leader
Uniform requirements? Two yellow stains and a ragged wife beater
You can serve from the soup kitchen, really get the chance to connect
But you couldn't get a point across if you wrote from the vertex
Change your whole lifestyle, ambition quickly turns into procrastination
I'll enjoy chewing this kid up, his verse just furthered my mastication
nice verse, nice battle..............
upp for some votes now...
Right Ima break this down
Ambitious
You lackin variety, and you think your skills are Diverse...?
Smack & rewind D, one bar sends ur reputation in reverse!
^ nice opener
Go ahead & rehearse, then see how bad this keystyle hurts....
Nice rap merks, the type that jerks & works to son this herb!
^ OK nothing special
Run with Acro Nims, I'll capture them & manufacture sins....
Fracture limbs, rip off ya face write noob & re-attatch the skin!
^ Pretty nice here the second part was very nice
That's to prewarn herbs you try to battle ...on a daily basis...
No real flow, you go four more holes than John Daly wasted!
^ Decent bar
You gettin more pitty laughs than Ben Stiller now a days...
Ur punches are off on holiday, & u thought filler sounded ok!?
^ nice finisher
Diverse
Your outlook's becoming grim...hope you don't fear death
Better be ambitious if u don't want to make a(n) L your next step
^ Was OK could have been better
Can't make an executive decision when i corrupt your vision
I know your an exec but we downsized, and cut out your position
^ Pretty nice
So now you can really take over, homeless shelter needs a leader
Uniform requirements? Two yellow stains and a ragged wife beater
^ Pretty nice again second line was ill
You can serve from the soup kitchen, really get the chance to connect
But you couldn't get a point across if you wrote from the vertex
^ Very nice and I like the way you used Maths in that
Change your whole lifestyle, ambition quickly turns into procrastination
I'll enjoy chewing this kid up, his verse just furthered my mastication
^ OK finisher could have been done better in my opinion
My vote goes to Ambitious because he was more consistant than Diverse but this was a pretty decent battle and just keep on doing ya things
holla
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upmm
You lackin variety, and you think your skills are Diverse...?
Smack & rewind D, one bar sends ur reputation in reverse!
^ok nice multis good stuff a good punch creative...ok opener
Go ahead & rehearse, then see how bad this keystyle hurts....
Nice rap merks, the type that jerks & works to son this herb!
^hmm i don't like the word jerks in a rap song....nb though
Run with Acro Nims, I'll capture them & manufacture sins....
Fracture limbs, rip off ya face write noob & re-attatch the skin!
^this would be painful...nice punch good multis...
That's to prewarn herbs you try to battle ...on a daily basis...
No real flow, you go four more holes than John Daly wasted!
^hhe eok this is a funny line....
You gettin more pitty laughs than Ben Stiller now a days...
Ur punches are off on holiday, & u used filler to rhyme away!
___^eheh nice good wordplay throughout i was feeling this verse good stuff..._______________
Your outlook's becoming grim...hope you don't fear death
Better be ambitious if u don't want to make a(n) L your next step
^meh....this is an OK opener been done....ok though
Can't make an executive decision when i corrupt your vision
I know your an exec but we downsized, and cut out your position
^creative good thinking kind of a weak punch though...
So now you can really take over, homeless shelter needs a leader
Uniform requirements? Two yellow stains and a ragged wife beater
^ok punch with nice filler line...
You can serve from the soup kitchen, really get the chance to connect
But you couldn't get a point across if you wrote from the vertex
^ooo nice mathematical even good creativity and punch...
Change your whole lifestyle, ambition quickly turns into procrastination
I'll enjoy chewing this kid up, his verse just furthered my mastication
^ok closer good vocab mastication ...nice...ok
although diverse i think had the best line in the battle he didn't come with enough to beat on ambioosu....ambitiosh...tech...who had multis and punches all the way through tech you lacked in personals and diverse you lacked in punches...good personals though.....vote tech...plz both of you hit this up it really needs votes and i need some topical head opinions so even though i voted against you diverse plz hit this up thanx...
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114166
Diverse-
42/50
I broke it down and accidently deleted dont want to again...
all nice punches and well worded cept for the first one and last
th wordings were choppy...good meta4s and wordplay along with
flow/structure and your personals...
Ambitious-40.5/50...I also broke yours down but same as /\there...
good punches choppy wording on the seond and last...and your closer
with the filler line thats kidna played but u made it better so...i gave it to ya anyway,
good wordings and flow/structure some meta4 i liked...good multis keep at it...
My V/Diverse...stated above/\Hit up this battle it's topical wit Rule here in Elevated...
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113194
punches`stricly were in favor of Amb.. ..came harder*.. ..
person.. .. `i think both had some nice shit but Amb.. ..had a slight advantage
multi`stricly goes in favor of Amb.. ..had a lot of these.. ..
creativity`both had some nice shit worked up here.. ..i felt that Amb.. ..had a lil more wittyness*.. ..
wordplay`goes 2 Amb.. ..cuz everything was connecting pretty good.. ..Diver.. ..had a lil kinda long lines in a sense.. ..
struc`goes to Amb.. ..had nice bar length.. ..
overall`i would say that Amb.. ..pulled this off.. ..i liked his verse a lot more.. ..had witty ass shit.. ..as for diver.. ..had some kinda blah n a sense.. ..
hit my battle in return.. ..you no which one it is.. ..
vote/Ambitious.. ..
note yea umm had to use this name to vote on this.Quote:
Originally Posted by ÷Thìñg÷
synadil ......or wever is in my crew corrupted visoins...vote shouldnt count as stated in rules no c votes
uppn
Ambitious - I was feeling most of the punches. They wernt the strongest, but 2 of them hit real nice. I liked the flow, and how didnt try to fuck with the structure so much. Cause so many people are doing that now. You had good vocab, it leveled out pretty nice. I thought this was a good verse, you came with wit. You show creativity when you can make up a punch, rather than searching the guys shit for personals, Good Drop...
Diverse - You had an alright verse, but it didnt have as much effect because of the opener. I lost my hype on that, and it didnt come back until about the 3rd bar. You did have a nice punch. I liked the structure for the same reasons i just said. You had good vocab as well, it leveled out just as good. Came with some wit, didnt have to search for shit and all of that. I felt you could have done better though...
Vote - Ambitious
Conclusion - It was a pretty even battle, but Diverse lost because of the opener and the less effect brought on the punches. It was an alright battle. Got kinda hard to judge, keep it up. Nice work to both of you.
Please return the favor and peep the battle between me and rule, in my sig. That would be much appriciated... Thanks
Good battle....both of ya came with some decent punches..
Go ahead & rehearse, then see how bad this keystyle hurts....
^Good Punch
You gettin more pitty laughs than Ben Stiller now a days...
Ur punches are off on holiday, & u used filler to rhyme away!
^Great closer
Diverse-
Can't make an executive decision when i corrupt your vision
I know your an exec but we downsized, and cut out your position
^Good personals
Change your whole lifestyle, ambition quickly turns into procrastination
I'll enjoy chewing this kid up, his verse just furthered my mastication
^Nice closer
both of ya came pretty strong..but I have to go with Ambitious...his punches were hitting harder...