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no dickryde/crew/fan votes
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10 Lines.....?
10 sounds good
iight.. ima add a rule.. No One with under 400 Posts Can Vote
Try’d to TAG along…
…..but skill is a bump in the road n his car broke down
Cuz kid face it..
...even if ya voting ring was back u couldnt win this now
If lying is dope? well then be honest, u always been true
watch me take V..&..V...
….attach those two toghether & ill take that letter too!
Chump change like poverty pay checks, wack lyrics = worthless
Please..when my piles itch is only time u scratch my surface
Homicide done wit eas.. left on the ground like carpet flees
Strip this imitation faster than 5 year old boys...
....playing with Fake Barbies
supposed to learn from mistakes...
..........but look at ya sig, u back at it agian now
& play time is over...
....so say bye bye to IJL cuz u just got kicked out!
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incase anyone doesnt know...
lyric aka TAG.. TAG was banned around November/ December for having a voting ring. Also, when he was talking to me, he told me that we were going to be battling. he said to not murk him so bad so that he gets kicked outa IJL.
Every Crew your in self destructs, First D.O.I. and now Wits End's delirious
Celesial lost his Dialect, Even Verbal Kent said yall can't contend serious
Celestial I dun Envy your Skillz, in fact none of ya aliases do
Had to battle Chrit as Slik Shadow, just so he'd aknowledge you
You think your a Celestial being? Get ya head outta da clouds ya fake
Cause with the whackness you come with...
...Got declined from the gates for heaven's sake
You aint talented linguistically cause you literally shot ya mouth off
No ability to talk...
...I de-feeted you so you can't walk the walk
Your flow and spits off...coming with nothing but played ass rhymes
Cause only fuckin reatards...
...Shoot for the moon, but get sonned all the time
Celestial:
Try’d to TAG along…
…..but skill is a bump in the road n his car broke down
Cuz kid face it..
...even if ya voting ring was back u couldnt win this now
If lying is dope? well then be honest, u always been true
watch me take V..&..V...
….attach those two toghether & ill take that letter too!
Chump change like poverty pay checks, wack lyrics = worthless
Please..when my piles itch is only time u scratch my surface
Homicide done wit eas.. left on the ground like carpet flees
Strip this imitation faster than 5 year old boys...
....playing with Fake Barbies
supposed to learn from mistakes...
..........but look at ya sig, u back at it agian now
& play time is over...
....so say bye bye to IJL cuz u just got kicked out!
Didn't really like the V & V line, barbies line was dopeness, mainly personals, the bump in the road line was pretty nice also.
Lyric:
Every Crew your in self destructs, First D.O.I. and now Wits End's delirious
Celesial lost his Dialect, Even Verbal Kent said yall can't contend serious
Celestial I dun Envy your Skillz, in fact none of ya aliases do
Had to battle Chrit as Slik Shadow, just so he'd aknowledge you
You think your a Celestial being? Get ya head outta da clouds ya fake
Cause with the whackness you come with...
...Got declined from the gates for heaven's sake
You aint talented linguistically cause you literally shot ya mouth off
No ability to talk...
...I de-feeted you so you can't walk the walk
Your flow and spits off...coming with nothing but played ass rhymes
Cause only fuckin reatards...
...Shoot for the moon, but get sonned all the time
Good wordplay, heaven's sake line was dope as fuck, de-feeted line was played as fuck. Shoot for the moon line was alright, but cold've made that line dope as fuck.
Punches: Lyric, just by a hair
Wordplay: Lyric, i didn't like the V & V line at all
Personals: Celestial, mainly his whole verse
Multis: Neither, no multis
Opener: Tie, Celestial had a nice personal, but so did Lyric
Closer: Tie, Celestial had a personal, Lyric had a wordplay
Vote - Lyric
Very close battle, but I have to go with Lyric because of better wordplay, the rest of your guy's stuff was nearly the same in both verses. Advice, flip some damn multis.
Nice battle.... but it was one sided.
Celestial had a few good lines, mainly the barbie comment... but some of your rhymes were weak... also you didnt rhyme at all during the first few lines...
Lyric has a name true to his style... you came blazing with vocab and some good multies... liked your punches too, the Chrit comment was dope..... flow wise, both were equal
vote = Lyric
Please drop an honest vote in my battle VS illtalic... its getting slept on...
uppin for honest votes......drop a link
Drop an honest explained vote here and we will check ya link
iight...
Lyric... Good wordplay... Vocabulary was good... Punches were nice...
Structure and flow were tied... Not many personals from either...
Celestial... Lacked in everything really... Punches didnt hit as hard... Wordplay and vocabulary where weak...
Just outdone in every topic...
v/ Lyric
Pz...
Quote:
iight...
Lyric... Good wordplay... Vocabulary was good... Punches were nice...
Structure and flow were tied... Not many personals from either...
Celestial... Lacked in everything really... Punches didnt hit as hard... Wordplay and vocabulary where weak...
Just outdone in every topic...
v/ Lyric
Pz...
cant agree more than that celestial i seen better from ya and i tink u lacked in places wen u cud and shud of cum harder nice battle tho both ya
i kno im not soposed 2 vote but i feel lyric got this he had better flow rythems and shit he wuz way better
v/ Lyric
Lyric wins this kinda weak battle cuz of the "Chrit" line...
That was real personal, real hard, and real nice.
Most of ya shit, from both slingas...
Was pretty madly played...
(a freakin "de-feet" line, come the fuck on!)
(you know "scratch the surface" is played as fuck too)
Celestial had one quotable, the "Barbie" line...realy funny.
But along with the "Chrit" one...
Lyric also had the "heaven's gate" linewhich I thought was creative and punny!
Peace