-RiZZo- vs. .iLL.

Rules
no feedin
no biting
no recyclin
no crew votes
no hater votes
no dickryder votes
10 lines
5 votes win
3-0KO

ur open callout u drop first ill reply shortly after

RiZ

where u at.....im trying to get this done with soon

Yo, I left after no one replied to my callout forever..i just now see this man, I'll hit this up Saturday, Im overwhelmed today

Sorry.

i am checking in trying to make this 50 charachters or more

please stop prewriting and drop its been over 2 days

y0 man i forgot bout this battle..im here though..writing now...you still up? If not im willing to accept the d/q, i've been out awhile, your choice..

Aw look, Rizzo, new to RB, and from Jersey//
Let me see, do all the gay fags flock from that city?//
His wack ass shit cant hit, it always Mizz-o's// (misses)
This dude been hangin around Snoop, fo shizzo my -Rizzo-//
But thats aiight, a newb tryin to fit in a' shit//
Fucking lil clit, tear him up so bad he'll need to learn to knit//
Doesnt show his battle record, must be scared of the feedback//
You just some trash blown in, and RB doesnt need that//
Sure my shit is late, a couple days, you see how anxious he was?//
His shit was pre-written, like every wannabe herb does//

Sorry bout the long delay man..no fucking feeding remember that..

heres my verse

"For-The-Thrill" leave him "Bloody" like in "Horror-Films" After this Battle He'll be *Scared to Write Again* so he wont "Record-his-Will"!// 1
ya *Heats Small* like "Forman-Grill" but "Beatin Me" is like *Monchisosyndrome* cuz "Your-not-ILL"!!// 2
"Battling-Me" its "Hazardous-See" cuz ima "Put u To Sleep" like a "Cat-thats-Diseased"//3
i "Back-Slap-Emcees" n "That-Has-to-Be" u dont "Live in Japan" but ull Wave the "White Flag-To-Me"!//4
u gettin "Walked All Over" like the "Terf-or-the-Pavement" i "Bring so Much Heat" u would think i "Worship-Satan"!!//5
ILL u'll "Circle-n-Pace-Quick" cuz his "Words-Dont-Say-Shit" only "Board u Respected On" is "Surf-or-Skatin"!!//6
To Go About Your Writing Yea theres "Certain-Ways-Kid" cuz its "Worthless-Hatin" yea u "Make-Shit" like "Terds-from-Raisons"//7
"Rip Your Head Off" its "Exertion-Face-Lift" if u knock me down im "Pulling u Down With Me" like "Curtains-on-Plays-Bitch"!//8
u aint "UnderGround" unless ur "Workin-in-a-Basement" and the way u "Write(right)" ur "Turnin-into-Hatred"!!//9
i aint Some1 u wanna be "Lurkin-in-a-Maze-With" so why u "HIDIN, PUSSY" like "Girlfriends-Who-Aint-Shavin"!!//10 (Hair Hides Pussy)

rep1

LMAO

.ill. im sorry to say man but
damn... you got murdered bro..

punches: riz....For-The-Thrill" leave him "Bloody"
like in "Horror-Films" After this Battle He'll be *Scared
to Write Again* so he wont "Record-his-Will"!// 1

personals: riz....u gettin "Walked All Over" like the
"Terf-or-the-Pavement" i "Bring so Much Heat" u
would think i "Worship-Satan"!!//5

flow ill: his wasnt stretched but lacked alot of shit

metas riz: i aint Some1 u wanna be "Lurkin-in-a-Maze-With"
so why u "HIDIN, PUSSY" like "Girlfriends-Who-Aint-Shavin"!!//

overall rizzo

lose the "" ** bolds illtalics and shit...makes your verse
look messy

alright...i am jsut used to the " and * from other sites but i notice thats not big here...thanks for the vote

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please vote upping again